Awww! Poor Bella she’s so kind and trys to help everybody but herself. I’m so glad she’s finally getting and understanding what she needs to do to get healthy! Alright Bella! Alright Edward! Forward you both go!

Oh shit! Is Jake a bear? Yes! I’m used to wolves but I’m still a bit confused...

All right, now we are getting somewhere, Bella is going to live, right?

Yes! God I wish he would tell her who he really is! Damn!

Oh Bella get away from that man, he’s all wrong for you! Only Edward is right for you!

Oh my!

I am loving this! Obviously he’s mind belongs to a much older man/vamp and I’m thinking that he knows that she’s his mate. Now if she would just find it out. I’m really loving this Bella. And since my husband died just a year ago I can definitely understand her grief...

Getting interesting!

Holy.
Fucking.
Moly.

This story blew me away. Just...poof! I don’t even know where to start. At first I was annoyed by Bella’s self-destructive behavior, then squicked out thinking of her lusting after a 17-yo (yeah, yeah, it’s Edward, but if it was some random guy named Brian, or Rick, or Chris, ewww).

So many plot twists that I never saw coming. I think I like your version of the Twilight supernatural a lot more than SM’s. There’s so much more depth to yours.

I was heartbroken for B when I thought she had to marry Jake. I had absolutely no idea how you were gonna tie up those loose ends, but your solution was elegant and made sense (that sounds silly, but so what!).

Thank you for sharing this story. It has truly moved me.

-Jen/mlbd

Unexpected... but glad to see the story progressing. Not an emo fan. Looking forward to what comes next

I liked this chapter. Good writing

I don't know whether to love you or not. So close... yet so far away. I'm ready for them to be together

Enjoying your fic

I been Expecting Edward to make his move and surprised that he hasn't

Lemony good