whats the extra blood for? surely Edward didn't take ALL of bellas blood and even if he did she would only need like 9 pints...just sayin

you know I'm really grossed out that Edwards in the body of a 17 year old and bellas fucking 30...that's just super fucking gross

Edward said mercy was just a old friend...then bella said she was his girlfriend...so which was it? let me guess shes just a hoe he used to fuck

so you start of the story by telling us what a fucking loser bella is? She expects to be late EVERYDAY the entire term? If her coffee is USUALLY TOO WEAK why doesn't she simply make it stronger? Does she not have any common sense? Oh this coffee is alittle too weak, tomorrow I'll add some more grounds. DUH it doesn't take a fucking genius

I fucking loved this story!

Jake pisses me off. Only time he shows interest in Bella is when she's interested in someone else. I hate when people play games. And I'm not really keen on Bella and Derek's relationship either, but that still doesn't excuse the fact that she was getting ready to cheat on him. That's disrespectful. But Derek should have told Bella upfront that he's celibate until marriage. You don't just leave something like that out.

This fic's Bella is so fucking messed up. Some authors can succeed in delivering these kinds of characters, but I'm afraid that this fic's Bella is just downright unlikable.

Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against liberal people who have sex left and right, but hell dude, your Bella is a downright slut to the core.

I don't care what anyone says. This is one of the best stories I've ever read. I've read it three times. I wish you would write more, but it's understandable that the Twilight craze is over. Thank you so much. My soul thanks you.

Hello! It has been a very long time since I first read this story, but I wanted to tell you how much I really love it. It is so unique and I have seen nothing like it before. I also love how human your main characters are. They are flawed and they make mistakes, but it just makes them more real. It was such a tumultuous journey till the end but I loved it. Anyway, thanks so much for sharing!

I love how unique, well written and awesomely different your story is! I love this Bella that is so different from the push over girl we read all the time. Thanks for sharing

I don't know why I never read this before. It was fabulous and so, so different. I cried so hard, and laughed out loud.

Thank for the absolutely unique and unpredictable story! This is the third time I've read this and I enjoyed it as much as the first... thank you!

ok I'm done...I thought mercy was a fucking lesbian? and Edward known about his mate for 50 years...and in the mean time hes fucking a lesbian?
and he finially meets his mate in forks...but fucks other woman at his little bungalow? why is Edward such a whore?

funny how this story would be soooo much better if you took out every part you came up with...slutty Edward...mercy brown...the bears...bella being middle fucking aged...paige...derek... its kinda all crap. I'm just skimming chapters now cause its getting really fucking boring.
having Edward take bella to a fucking shrink? stupid as fuck

when bella was basically asking Edward who hes been fucking...Edward pretty much said that there have been other woman in his bed...yaya but you eclipse them all...ya sure ANYWAY...so who has Edward been fucking sense hes been in forks? and how many woman are we talking about?