| Reviews for Osa Bella |
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  jk chapter 21 . 5/11/2016 bella was super fucking pathetic in chapter 21 and Edward was a stupid dick...I wouldn't even want to be with him after the way he talked to her...telling her to shut the fuck up? threatening to take her home? Go fuck yourself Edward seriously |
| jk chapter 12 . 5/11/2016 ok well there we go...Edwards interested in mercy he just had cold feet... good now lets get those two out of the story...bellas too fucking old for him anyway...and it sounds like he has a lot of history with mercy so they can be together... now make this a jake and bella story |
| jk chapter 8 . 5/11/2016 I wish bella would stop thinking about Edward...hes just a fucking kid and honestly I'm grossed out! bella and jake! I don't get the mercy borwn bullshit...you should just cut that shit out...I don't think it adds anything to the story the bear shit too...like you need it when you already have wolves and vamps...its just overkill...make your own story with your bullshit...adding it to twilight doesn't make it better |
| jk chapter 2 . 5/11/2016 wait wait wait...bella is almost THIRTY? and Edwards 17 ohhhhh that's just fucking nasty...nope doesn't work...the woman cant be that much older...nope...notta...what would a grown ass woman want with a 17 year old boy? GROSS |
 SLKerouac chapter 37 . 5/7/2016 So different story. Loved it. Thanks for writing. This Bella was so different from anything else I read. What an ending. Edward and Bella got their forever and a bonus of having twin boys. A true family. |
| pavie chapter 37 . 4/23/2016 Your story was beautiful! It's one of the best unique AU I've read! Thank you for sharing it with us. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2016 This was a fantastic story! Very original. |
| ninny 1 chapter 37 . 3/6/2016 What a story I loved every well written and imaginative Thank you so much |
| Guest chapter 37 . 2/19/2016 That is the most unstable Bella I've ever read. You certainly didn't Mary Sue her! It's really tough to write a f%d up protagonist that the reader can still like. Good job! |
| cherrystalker chapter 37 . 2/13/2016 Amazing and unusual take of a story. I didn't see it coming. Love it! |
| Drithligh chapter 36 . 1/8/2016 This was an interesting story. I quite enjoyed it, though it got a little scarily angsty there at a few points. Somehow the Native American legend feel you created seemed more unique than other fics I've read. Thanks for sharing. |
| twigfairy chapter 37 . 12/29/2015 Thank you for writing this story! It was the most amazing unpredictable creative story ever. I know I'm going to be rereading this many times :) |
| lmc123 chapter 33 . 12/27/2015 Thank you for sharing your personal reasons for writing this story, it made the experience of reading, make more sense |
| lmc123 chapter 34 . 12/27/2015 And this bella, definately unlike any other I have read |
| lmc123 chapter 35 . 12/27/2015 Such an unusual take on the story |