so how could edward be with other "wome"(vampires) when he
knew the love of his life, his soulmate, his forever love is
coming?
idk how i would feel about that...i do know
actually, i may be really pissed!
WTH?

this is getting weirder and weirder...
not sure how i feel about it...how i feel bout this foolish crazy bella...

so if he knew she was coming for 52 years and even searched for her
along with Alice's visions,
why did he not find her for almost 30 years of her life?
why so late? why not when she was much younger?
like when she was 16 or 17?

this bella is very foolish...
the only way this edward or any edward would
love this bella is due to the soul-mate clause...
imo

WTH?
she's being nuts!
guess he likes that...

Strange but fun read! Certainly unique. Thank you for sharing this.

I thank you for writing this incredible, imaginative story. I don't think I've ever read anything like it!

This has got to be one of the wildest plot lines I've ever read in Twi Fic! But crazy as it is I can't stop reading. LOL. I'm just hoping for a HEA for Edward and Bella.

Great chapter! This is what their honeymoon first night should have been like in the book.

I want you to know I really like this story. Perhaps because it's so unique in the Twilight Fan Fic world.

Does she think all that happened with Edward in the woods was a nightmare?

Oh no! She didn't! She could never be happy with Derek, they are too different and besides, I thinks it's strange that he hasn't brought her home to meet the parents strange about that.

Well thank god she had the sense to call a halt to that! Not only for her sake but for Edward's as well. Okay, we all know he isn't"t really 17, but no one else does and therein lies the problem. I'll tell you though, it was pretty hot and I don't know if I would have had the fortitude to put the beakers on if it was me in that cabin with Edward. How long before he wears her down I wonder.

She's toast! Got it bad and that ain't good. Well it could be good, if they aren't caught that is.

I can feel the vibes between them, almost like those wavy lines that represent heat rising off something.

I'm here because of a rec fromRob Attack and they've never failed me yet. I will say that I'm kind of over the Cullen's as high schoolers but I'll hang out for a while and see how it goes. I like Bella already. She's a mess but feisty, I think. ;)