Reviews for Osa Bella
imaginevampires chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
This was great story. Very creative and fun. I loved the mythology at the end , and the many nods to canon throughout. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.
goodbyegooodbye chapter 9 . 9/2/2013
Wow, Bella the cheater. -_-
shellyduran chapter 37 . 8/29/2013
I'm so glad I finally got a chance to read this. Thank you for a very unique, different story. I love the idea that the wolves aren't the only shape shifters in the Twilight world. Also, a big shout out for using Mercy Brown in your story. As a Rhode Islander, I'm well aware of who she was, although I've never visited her grave. I wonder how many of your readers thought to google her. As soon as I saw the name, I did a double take. LOL! All the angst in this story- OY! Poor Bella, I'm glad things turned out the way they did for her.
SandytheSandstorm chapter 37 . 7/27/2013
I have enjoyed reading your story so much. Every chapter I raced through. I loved the story name wasn't explained until the final chapter. The story of Hala before her death wasn't explained until final chapter. I had to reread the story before I understood what you were telling. Definitely passing this on. So glad I found it.

I am so sorry about your about your sister. I couldn't imagine loosing my sister, my best friend. May you continue to fine peace and love
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 37 . 7/1/2013
Aw, can't believe this is the end!
Loved the beautiful renewal ceremony: the unity, the acknowledgement, the ongoing pledge.
Love the supernatural tie in.
Love the passion and snchronicity.
So many things to love about this story. Its almost like a tale told in three parts.
This is one of my very favourite Bella's.
Thank you so much for sharing your talent & tale
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 36 . 7/1/2013
Oh, I'm so happy. I now get the story titlte & meaning, lovely & very clever. I'm glad the ceremony turned into something more and everything was finally sorted out. The kkermode bear gave far more than they ever bargained for. Is that how the spirit bear carries on immortaly, passing from one worthy person to another?
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 35 . 7/1/2013
I have a feeling the unbinding ceremony is not going to go as the bear tribe think. I think instead of 'freeing' Bella, it is somehow going to further validate her link to Edward
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 34 . 7/1/2013
God, how many proposals can one girl have? I thought it was only famous actors that did that ultiple times.
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 33 . 7/1/2013
There is a reason Bella isn't transforming now. She has already undergone some kind of change that I think is interefering with what Edward tried to do.
I can't wait to get to the bottom of all these mysteries!
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 32 . 7/1/2013
So Hala has been guiding both Bella and Edward in some way. I hope they can settle everything peacefully
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 31 . 7/1/2013
Bella needs to reach out to the white bear. She has had visons of her before. There is something they are all missing.
I really hate Sue right now.
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 30 . 7/1/2013
I have faith in you coming through with a HEA.
I can't help but feel Jacob has manipulated this situation to his owm benefit. I know Edward probably would have seen this if it were true, but it all seems a bit too convenient.
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 29 . 7/1/2013
The bears helped Bella. Why? I'm dying to find out what gives there. I don't think she is finished with them yet, even though I'm glad she is back with Edward.
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 28 . 7/1/2013
I knew it! Bella has some kind of link to the bears. I don't believe they will hurt her, they just needed her to listen or find out whatever she has been bought there for.
By the way, Jacob is acting like a sulky, stubborn prick!
Quittingcoldturkey chapter 27 . 7/1/2013
Bella seeing visions of the white she like the white bear? A possible link of peace between vamps and the wolves?
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