Love it so far. I hope Derek gets peppered sprayed... or the Cullen's just scare him half to death.

That was freaking intense. "Forever is a lie". Pretty moving there at the end. I just love this story.

she is so distracted. Very intriguing story nonetheless. Thanks.

I fucking love this story! I'm also a shit because this is the first time I've reviewed and I've been reading it for a while at Twitarded. Now that I know it's on fanfiction I'll review each chapter.

It cracks me up how much more mature Edward is than Bella. Although, given how long he's been around I guess that makes sense. Really, though, I love the pill popping, booze swilling, emotionally all over the map Bella.

"Bella," he said. "You have no idea how long I've waited for you. And I will wait for you forever, if that's what it takes."

*sigh* God, he's so... perfect!

But, be a man and man up to her Edward! Tell her the truth already, or she's going to go insane from fear and confusion!

Aww Emmett, such a gentle giant! He's gorgeous also : )

God, I would literally KILL for an EPOV right about now! But, luckily for me, that's exactly what you are offering for the FGB! My lucky day! *grin*

Loved this chapter, as always hun and I can't wait for the next one! Hopefully, we will see some serious heart to heart soon and some truth from Edward? xox

I read this Wed and now get the updates from FF so I decided to read it again and it was even better the second time- GAWD- when Edward says he wants her "willing", my panties just about floated away! Love you more than eva! MWAH! Can't wait till yer weekend update!

"Are you coming over tonight?"

"Are you wearing a thong?"*

*Hilarious!

Your Cullens have to be the most conspicuous Cullens I've ever encountered! How can they afford to be so dangerous/careless? I mean, it's almost too easy to discredit Derek (the raving lunatic) who is sprouting of stuff about being possessed and such. (I really hate him; he's such a sanctimonious *ss! That being said, is this supposed to be a satirical POV of Christians?) Bella is annoying too and I wish Edward would just tell her, but I understand she's slightly crazy and won't take it well. How long to the mystery of the bears is revealed. It's crazy (in a good way) how we're almost 20 chapters in and I still have no idea what's happening in the big picture (with the vamps, Quiletes, and bears).

Love this story. Been following it on Twitarded but glad to get the alerts here. Can't wait to find out where this is headed. Looking forward to finding out what's up with the bears.

"He thinks that I'm stalking you, and he's worried that you can't see me for what I really am."

"And what's that?" I asked.

"It's complicated," he said.

"So you think he's right?"

"I know he is," he said.

Okay... WTF was with that bombshell? No, there's no way Derek could know what Edward is. Right...?

AND, I know Edward is lying about the Lake Cresent... The sunglasses, the 'I knew it was too soon'... Too soon for him to be around her after consuming human blood?

Why doesn't he just tell her?

He broke up with her? What an arsehole!

Ooooh, Edward's coming back! Hopefully... : )

What? No, no, NO! I can't believe i'm caught up now... I so badly want to just keep reading and find out what happens. Not i'm all depressed... *sob* lol.

Well, I cannot wait for the next chapter hun, i'm dying to know if he comes back, how that conversation will go!

Absolutely LOVING this story hun! Honestly, brilliant! xox

Oh, Jesus... He is a Vamp!

Why doesn't he just tell her? I mean, she saw him drain a bear!

Speaking of bears, i'm guessing they are attacking now out of retaliation? For draining that white bear?

And Derek, that son of a bitch! I'm so pissed at him!

"You sure do know a lot about the Spanish Influenza pandemic," Derek said. "Did you do a paper on it or something?" - 'No, I lived through it, arsehole!' Haha! Sorry, couldn't resist! : )

Oh god, it wasn't a dream, was it? Edward really drained that bear! Hence the sunglasses. But, why were his eyes red? Doesn't make sense...

UNLESS, that bear was actually a human, an American Indian transformed in bear form? Maybe that's why the old man was there?

"And by the way, congratulations on your engagement. I can't believe I had to hear it from your father, though. You're now on my shit list."

I love Jake! Straight to the point, he knows it's a wrong move on her part...

"Monte Carlo, gambling and Bond, James Bond," - 'Oh- My god...' *giggle* I loved that part in the Twilight movie : )

"Prom is an important rite of passage," I said. "You shouldn't miss it." - I LOVE the Irony that it's now Bella saying that to Edward : )

She's comprimising for her own fucking wedding? Grr, i'm so angry! Relationships are supposed to be 50/50 Bella!

Hmm, why would Edward be so upset of seeing Bella in that dress? Perhaps that was what they wore in 1918 when he was a teen and he imagined her when he was human? Maybe he saw it from one of Alice's visions? OR, maybe i'm reading too much into it and if he is indeed human, that 'mum' reason is completely plausable... (but, I don't think so...?)

"How soon will he be eighteen?" she asked, shocking me."

Hahaha, oh my god, I love this woman!

""Sure, okay. Whatever. Are you still you?" he asked.

"I don't know," I said.

"Don't do it. Don't marry him.""

Exactly! You're not yourself with him Bella! : (

Oh my god! She did NOT just say yes! *crickets* : (

"Like, if he suggested that maybe I'd like to skydive from an antique war plane, I'd think, yeah, maybe I would. If he recommended I start mainlining heroin, I might consider it."

You're not alone honey! Edward has that affect on women... ; )

"What was I doing, comparing my 37-year-old boyfriend to my 17-year-old student?"

Maybe because Edward 'gets' you and you don't have to walk on egg shells around him? You can't fight fate and the heart wants what the heart wants...

"Then he moved his mouth to my ear and whispered, "Unless you want me to.""

Holy shit woman! My insides turned to goo and I smiled like an idiot when I read that. Jesus, seductive Edward is... damn!

He called her Bella! And they kissed! That was a hot kiss *grin*

But, i'm so fucking confused! (Pardon the french...) If he was really a vamp, why would he have needed to call Carlisle to pick him up? Why wouldn't he have just run home?

God, most of the time I think he is a vamp, I mean, knowing that Derek is going to propose - reading minds, but then moments like this have me questioning...! : (

"I had already introduced Derek to my father right after New Year's. Charlie hadn't been overly impressed, but he was able to sit with him for half a football game."

Hahaha! Shit, if Charlie wasn't impressed with Derek, imagine what he's day if she told him about her infatuation with Edward! : )

I don't know, there's something about Derek that I don't like... I can't quite put my finger on it, but he hides to much and is too secretive for my liking...

"You can invite Mr. Banner if you like," he said. "Is he going to be around next week?"

Haha, I have the feeling that Edward very well knew that Derek would NOT be around next week, but asked to make it less like a 'date' *smirk*