Reviews for Osa Bella |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I'm going to say Jake & the boys are bears & Bella kis so going to run into Edward at that concert. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious to these bears. They can't be the wolves from the books so I wonder if they are just in bear form. Did that make sense? Lol great chapter. I'm so intrigued by Edward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE how the canon story played out in the tarot cards. This is going to be tricky. Him supposed to be a student an all. But the cards did say eternally Bella. Eternally indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I saw this on Twitter & decided to have a look. I'm not ususally one for AU but I had to check this out. I like where it's going! Can't wait to see how Edward & Bella really interact with one another! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "In my bed..." heh heh heh God my heart just breaks for Bella. I think a good romp in the sack with a sexeh 17 year old may help out just a bit. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best. Chapter. Yet. I'm on my phone & it's too hard to copy & paste, but there were so many good lines here. I especially loved the line about the figure from a snowglobe. I'm kind of pissed you didn't disclose your talent when we first "met". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Myg! I've been reading this over at Twitarded from the very beginnign but it is justeasier for me to review over here at . Anyway, I love your Edward and Bella here. I love Edward's persona. He truly sounds like a 100-something man trapped in a 17 year old body. It's amazing to me how you do that. Just wanted to let you know how much I'm loving this fic. Love the "dream" sequence by the way...I would never in a million years been able to pull that off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh...I don't like Derek. Can one of the bears please to be eating him soon? Thanks. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking men. Pffffftttt. I feel like something is up with this Banner guy. *makes shifty eyes* And the bears...I love it. Again, can't wait to see where it leads. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wooooo hooooo! I like where this is heading. :) Ok, so maybe if I go out Tuesday night I'll run into some hot guy that I have a crush on (that apparently I don't even know about) and it will be love at first sight? #delusional Ok, no more time for words. Must move on to 6. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww...I kinda like Jacob. Don't tell anyone. ;) I'm turing 29 on Tuesday and I'm a little depressed about it. eHarmony just sent me an email with the subject, "Meg, here's all you need to know about dating at mid-life." I cried. So can you send a hunk of burning man love over to get me drunk? I'm pretty easy when I'm sloshed. heh heh I really love the intuitive stuff. I may or may not dabble. Ok, I definitely do. lol It's a great addition to the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm going to catch up and review every chapter as I do it, so I apologize in advance. I am SO intrigued by the bears! I can't wait to find out what's going on with them. And I want to know what Edward's deal is too...he seems to know more than he's letting on as well. Ok...on to chapter 4! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another fantastic chapter! I would really like to see Bella pull her head out of her ass soon though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "And though I felt ill, really ill, when I thought about Edward falling in love with someone who wasn't me..." Why don't women listen to themselves? ARG! Wow, I can feel Edward's desperation with Bella like it was my own. Why do people settle? Why do people feel the need to do what others want them to do in opposition to what they should do for themselves. And why are psychology people so much better at helping others than themselves? *fans self* "There were a good, respectable six inches of space between us as we danced, the length of an average adult hand from wrist to fingertip. Our bodies only met in three places. One, where his hand held mine and the coldness of his touch relieved the intense heat I felt radiating out of my palm. Another where my other hand landed on his shoulder and I had to consciously stop myself from moving my fingers lovingly over it. And the third where his left hand rested on my lower back. That was my favorite. I imagined that hand pushing me to him, holding me against him. There was so much potential for that hand, but out there in the open, with witnesses and all, it behaved itself." I think I might go cry for a little bit now - big sigh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "In fact, I thought with a little more work I could stretch my empirical science loving brain enough to consider the possibility that the world was not just those things that we can see, hear, touch, smell or taste. Maybe there was some magic left in it after all." I believe she is really going to need this in the coming chapters ;) "another chance at marriage with a solid man who loved me." Hmmm but she doesn't say that she loves him. The torture of wanting someone to NOT do something is painful. I have been the Edward asking someone to not do something because you know it isn't right for them. That was all too real through your writing (but that is a good thing). "If I was married, I knew I could keep myself away from Edward." HA is all I have to say to that. ""Yes," I said." Dang it! Reading back over this comment I see that I am treating Bella like my friend. I am trying to have her hear me and do things I wish I would have done. So real and so good, Myg. Thank you. |