Reviews for Osa Bella
AnahyR chapter 37 . 8/30/2016
I love how unique, well written and awesomely different your story is! I love this Bella that is so different from the push over girl we read all the time. Thanks for sharing
susanreader chapter 37 . 7/3/2016
I don't know why I never read this before. It was fabulous and so, so different. I cried so hard, and laughed out loud.
faraha87 chapter 37 . 6/25/2016
Thank for the absolutely unique and unpredictable story! This is the third time I've read this and I enjoyed it as much as the first... thank you!
jK chapter 25 . 5/12/2016
ok I'm done...I thought mercy was a fucking lesbian? and Edward known about his mate for 50 years...and in the mean time hes fucking a lesbian?
and he finially meets his mate in forks...but fucks other woman at his little bungalow? why is Edward such a whore?
jk chapter 23 . 5/11/2016
funny how this story would be soooo much better if you took out every part you came up with...slutty Edward...mercy brown...the bears...bella being middle fucking aged...paige...derek... its kinda all crap. I'm just skimming chapters now cause its getting really fucking boring.
having Edward take bella to a fucking shrink? stupid as fuck
jk chapter 22 . 5/11/2016
when bella was basically asking Edward who hes been fucking...Edward pretty much said that there have been other woman in his bed...yaya but you eclipse them all...ya sure who has Edward been fucking sense hes been in forks? and how many woman are we talking about?
jk chapter 21 . 5/11/2016
bella was super fucking pathetic in chapter 21 and Edward was a stupid dick...I wouldn't even want to be with him after the way he talked to her...telling her to shut the fuck up? threatening to take her home? Go fuck yourself Edward seriously
jk chapter 12 . 5/11/2016
ok well there we go...Edwards interested in mercy he just had cold feet...
good now lets get those two out of the story...bellas too fucking old for him anyway...and it sounds like he has a lot of history with mercy so they can be together...
now make this a jake and bella story
jk chapter 8 . 5/11/2016
I wish bella would stop thinking about Edward...hes just a fucking kid and honestly I'm grossed out!
bella and jake!

I don't get the mercy borwn should just cut that shit out...I don't think it adds anything to the story

the bear shit you need it when you already have wolves and vamps...its just overkill...make your own story with your bullshit...adding it to twilight doesn't make it better
jk chapter 2 . 5/11/2016
wait wait wait...bella is almost THIRTY? and Edwards 17 ohhhhh that's just fucking nasty...nope doesn't work...the woman cant be that much older...nope...notta...what would a grown ass woman want with a 17 year old boy? GROSS
SLKerouac chapter 37 . 5/7/2016
So different story. Loved it. Thanks for writing. This Bella was so different from anything else I read. What an ending. Edward and Bella got their forever and a bonus of having twin boys. A true family.
pavie chapter 37 . 4/23/2016
Your story was beautiful! It's one of the best unique AU I've read! Thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
This was a fantastic story! Very original.
ninny 1 chapter 37 . 3/6/2016
What a story
I loved every well written and imaginative
Thank you so much
Guest chapter 37 . 2/19/2016
That is the most unstable Bella I've ever read. You certainly didn't Mary Sue her! It's really tough to write a f%d up protagonist that the reader can still like. Good job!
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