OH MY GOSH, this story is amazing. Everything up to now is so great, 'basking in nerdism' , toothless enjoying 'The Stuff' and just the whole one sided conversation makes for a great story

This was awesome!

"Hello, Sky Lady, Night Lady, Father Creator. Toothless the Lightning Person, here. Please let me remain a bachelor for the rest of my days and never, ever have a crush like that poor boy has. Amen."

AHAHAH sweetheart just wait, your turn is coming XD
(HTTYD 3 was the best!)

Binged this in a night. Now i’m Too tired but know that I freaking love you for bringing this story into existence I am so happy and I think I shed quite a bit of tears during reading. Also that red death is scary!

I love this. all of this. but especially Toothless' commentary

"Hello, Sky Lady, Night Lady, Father Creator. Toothless the Lightning Person, here. Please let me remain a bachelor for the rest of my days and never, ever have a crush like that poor boy has. Amen."

LOL. you'll forget all of that when you meet a certain light fury in the future toothless dear

I have just one thing to say:
AMAZING

So i've been loving the fanfic so far. I've read another "HTTYD from Toothless POV" (by Chocobo Scribe) and while it was also pretty good, it was also way more faithful to the actual movies (except a few extended scenes). But this takes it too a whole new level. I love the story of Toothless origin and role in the world. The connection with other Night Furies and how it got severed. I also really like how the bonding with Hiccup and Toothless is portrayed over several months (instead of how the movie portrays it, in several days). Really great.

But then this chapter came, and i don't really feel right by it. I think that the whole "Hiccup is a traitor" and "Outlaw and leave him to day" doesn't really fit and comes a bit out of nowhere. It wasn't really mentioned earlier in the story. Only that Toothless would be killed if they found him, not that Hiccup would be punished as well. It feels a bit forced for the added drama. And sure it gives a nice heartbreaking moment in the story... but i still don't really like it.

But i still have 2 chapters to go, so maybe it will pay off.

this chapter is my favourite

amazing story definitely a favorite

Sad lonely Hiccup with no real tribe of his own, writing poetry-reminds me of Fishlegs

Yeah, I suspected the chapter names were in-jokes of some kind. This was good.

A Berk is, like, an inconsiderate arsehole. THAT GUY who pushed in line at the canteen or ignores right-of-way on the road.

Your book reminds me a bit of Spirit Stallion of the Cimarron except less 'politically correct'.

*narrows eyes* You just wanted to stop having to translate Hiccup, didn't you? I'm on to your game...