|Reviews for Points of Familiarity|
| Belomor chapter 1 . 2/26
Shinji still butt-monkey. Boring.
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 5 . 8/27/2013
Huh, interesting but also quite ... far reaching changes with the future-travellers here.
As I deeply dislike Time travel when not executed spot on I do hope thats not too much of the main plot (yet again you abandoned this fic after the next chapter so...).
Overall well written but hellishly confusing now (and the timelinerewrite is not a good idea. Too much old knowledge would still be there after only 600 years, and other effects of Magic would have taken longer than that).
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 3 . 8/24/2013
Huh, Camouflaged HighTech Assasin wanting to shoot Louise?
Who might THAt be I wonder ...
Pretty grand Chapter, seeing its length the few mistakes ware neglegible.
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
Crazier indeed, but alos deeper, and at least for me showing lots of potential, includeng lots of potentially lethal ... sidelinings of the plot?
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Interesting go so far.
Alas, the "original" Shinji is the lowest part of NGEs fascinating setting for me, so I do hope you get some evolution into it. :)
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
Hmmm, Gendo taking charge, unexpected but not bad...
I loved the part with Loungeville at the end.
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Only a few mistakes, nothing if one looks at the length of this chapter.
Also, the fight with Tabitha was simply perfect, including the aftermath. :)
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Yep, got it.
Although it seems a bit odd that Shinji is quite THAT human physically, I can only see one way how this story could go wrong, and that is if you lose focus of the plot too much (a problem I felt Shinjy and WH40k had too).
| Arkh Cthuul chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Despite your claims, so far I like the concept quite a lot.
Granted, Canon Shinji IS an annoying wuss, butr then, if played right this does not prelude awesomeness.
I am intruiged.
| Brenden chapter 6 . 8/20/2013
| Weaponized Mind chapter 6 . 6/30/2013
This got weird, fast. I enjoyed this, but I can see how the plot kind of got away from you. Anyway for what it is, it's still pretty good.
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2013
So Shinji is an angel, and the five children become pilots of the masks. They, like evas are made from 'angels'. And in the end they escape the fourth impact by using a reverse familiar summoning spell to go to another world? Or is deathfog the leftover planet with a massive lcl ocean like the setting of You Can Not Redo? I kind of miss Asuka's banter, but I thought you made good progress on bringing it back with the "mama" part from the last chapter. Interesting how much her baby resembles her with the seeking of a mother's attention.
| Ashleythetiger chapter 6 . 2/21/2013
I quite liked this odd fic... sad to see it get a dead notice... yes ther eis a rewrite but im guessing certain things will be lost
I quite liked the many personalities that showed up in Shinji too...
I wanted to know what was up with them faces and wht Shinji is and his skills etc
oh well looks like im off to read the rewrite... still thank you for bringing some odd giggles to my person with the reading of this enjoyable fic:)
| Reishin Amara chapter 6 . 8/16/2012
i think u only fudged it when this future shit was u shouldve simply had shinji pull a 2.22 GIVE HER BACK moment to get seista fce it...glowing body..blue flaming skin...red glowing eyes...he wa totally GAR and could show his epicness.
| Starburstia chapter 6 . 8/12/2012
What the crap just happeneeeeed. it was slowly becoming more disconnected and unexplained but I was so looking forward to it :(