Reviews for Pieces of a Dream
JackAubrey'sWorld chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Where did Rin come from? Why is she on the Ship? You need an explanation as to why Rin is on the Ship.. And there's another mistake I spotted, the Doctor isnt called 'Dr. Stephens, his name is Stephen Maturin!
karabell-karaboo723 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
How on earth did "Rin" end up on the ship? What is her purpose? Dropping an OC into a story at random is a terrible idea. Besides, having a woman onboard a ship was bad luck. This is not getting off to a very good start.
Piedgy777 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Yaaay! It's like you read my mind- I was so tempted to write about Warley living as he is lovely- I'm very glad you wrote it! :D I love your descriptions which really create the atmesphere made in the film, good job! :D
Pierre Gringoire chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
The doctor's name is Dr. Stephen Maturin, not Stephens. And who is Rin? Why is she on the ship? Why is Aubrey letting her tag along? You can't just drop your OC into the story with no explanation for what she's doing there.