|Reviews for Looking from Afar|
| aku no tensai chapter 18 . 1/31/2013
AH! Adorable! But now I'm sad 'cuz the story is over...
How DID Nanjiroh find out? And when?
I'm sure he'll calm Rinko down too, so Ryoma has little to worry about
GOOD JOB TEZU-CHAN!
And thank YOU for all your hard work and the effort that went into this amazing story! Fantastic job!
| aku no tensai chapter 16 . 1/31/2013
Ohhhh, I LIKE her! Thank god/you that she isn't Sakuno... and that she have no problems with the arranged marriage situations!
| aku no tensai chapter 15 . 1/31/2013
...Well, I saw it coming though I didn't know who would be the one to call it off
This HAS to have a happy ending! It has too! But...there's only three chapters left?
Haaah, it seems that I'll be crushed either way. Either they split up for good and I'm crushed, or they get back together by the time three chapters are up and I'm devastated that the story's over!
I suppose the better thing is to go with option B, since option A means that they don't end up together AND the story's over...;_;
I read your reply back to me on all my slightly crazy reviews and I'm happy to hear that you like them! Sometimes I get a bit over happy/hyper in the wee hours of morning while reading a particular story I either adore or hate. (If you're wondering, you're the former!)
About the spelling, don't worry about it After I sent that message, I read the chapters after it and realized that you got a lot better!
I'll definitely take the time to read your other stories too! :)
Thanks for replying back!
| aku no tensai chapter 14 . 1/30/2013
Ah! Too adorable! Such a lovey-dovey atmosphere with such childish-mature scenes! So warming! My heart swells with romantic thoughts of both generations of families
And...such a heart-wrenching scene to bring you back to reality!
Just...please tell me that it's not Ryuuzaki Sakuno that's being picked out for Ryoma T_T
Anyone else? Fine...kinda, but Ryuuzaki? NO!
Well, I suppose I'll just have to read on to find out ne?
And I guess I was wrong about the whole 'jealousy' thing right? Ah well
Thank you for the amazing chapters until now! But I think I'll force myself to stop here. It's pretty much 1 o'clock in the morning where I am and I'm dead tired, even if my body doesn't recognize it yet, my eyes do!
| aku no tensai chapter 13 . 1/30/2013
Ah! What a shocker! I wonder if Rinko's just a bit jealous? Well, I'm basing this off of the line "my husband wants to have a quick reunion with your father…and mother, so it would be a great excuse if you let us drive you."
And how she reluctantly accepts the cheesecake maybe?
Haha, things are bound to get interesting; what with Ryoma's magnificent act, more secrets being revealed, old (possible) rivals and friends, and a secret relationship to keep secret
Speaking of secrets, I wonder how Rinko will react to Ryoma's relationship? Since she cares deeply about appearances and status.
Had Tezuka been a girl, I'm sure that there wouldn't have been much of a problem. Emphasis on 'much'.
What she did with Fuji-san was...extreme to say the least;
And...what happened to Nanako in this story? Does she not exist?
Good job once more :)
| aku no tensai chapter 12 . 1/30/2013
Wow...! Hmm, I wonder if they'll question the change in the bed sheets?
Rinko-san is quite intimidating, I'd be nervous too had I been Ryoma or Tezuka!
Good job for the past two chapters :)
| aku no tensai chapter 10 . 1/30/2013
I've noticed it for a while but haven't mentioned it until now;
When you write the word 'costumers' you write it like the word 'costume'. As in, an article of clothing one wears for a dramatic presentation.
It should be written as "customer(s)". A client etc...
FUJI TO THE RESCUE! You gotta love him in this story I'll admit that I was worried when you introduced him as Tezuka's first friend. I was afraid that it'd turn into a love triangle between Ryo, Tezu and Fuji, but I'm glad it didn't.
To be honest, I hate those stories a lot. I'll still read them, because as much as I hate them, some are good (and I just seem love to torture myself like that). I might even favorite some of them depending on how it goes!
But, I hate a love triangle concerning those three because I can never decide on who to put whom with!
In my head, all of them belong with either one, creating various possibilities for endings And even though they can all belong to either one (TezuxRyo, RyoxFuji, FujixTezu) I get pissed with the pairing and the fact that the other one is left out! So the best decision is obviously OT3 right? Right.
The only way to break my hatred of this love triangle pairings, is to either have OT3 or make one of them absolutely detestable! Or...of course, there's the way you did it too...yeah, you're amazing with this!
And...Tezuka's pissed me off with this chapter, but not because of how unresponsive he is this time. It's because I know he sees Ryoma, possibly even more than he ever did before; such as he highlights in his hair, his eyes when he's angry, the clothes he's wearing etc...
He notices him, but just can't get the words out no matter what!
I understand what it feels like to lose someone really close to you, but still! It's really frustrating!
*sigh* Well, in any case, I love how the chapter went and ended!
Great job once again :)
You always seem to know how to hit home with the more intense chapters XD
(Don't know if it's a good thing for making me feel so much even though this is complete fiction or not, but one things for sure: you have awesome writing skills! Even if some words are spelled/spelt incorrectly)
Never give up writing okay? You're too good at it! Too good.
| aku no tensai chapter 9 . 1/30/2013
AHHHH! You got me teary-eyed!
Well, I guess my wish for Tezuka's Ojii-san to be okay won't be granted, but it's fine. It's fine 'cuz Tezuka will make it out of this in one piece, and so will his family, and Ryoma will be there for him every step of the way, and it'll only make their bond that much stronger in the end.
Yes, that's what I'm going for.
| aku no tensai chapter 8 . 1/30/2013
I KNEW IT! When the phone vibrated, I was like "Ah, damn. No sexy time now"
I hope his grandfather'll be okay though (even if he did unintentionally interrupt the smut)!
I hope they last for a long time together, Ryoma and Tezuka that is!
Good story so far, and I love this chapter in particular!
I hope the future chapters are just as interesting
Well, I'll get back to reading now so, thank you for the amazing chapters and for all your hard work thus far!
Never give up writing ne?
| xxx-akiho-xxx chapter 18 . 12/29/2012
This was so cute! You should do an epilogue! PLEASE
| parson-ash chapter 18 . 9/12/2012
Omg ! Im speechless with this story . I absolutley loved it!
| Hiruma lover chapter 18 . 7/30/2012
Absolutely loved it :D One of my all time favorite Prince Of Tennis Fanfics
| Just another fan P again chapter 18 . 4/19/2012
grr i could finish my review because my cat jump't on the keyboard. what i wanted to say is that i'm really curious of what will happen next... i didn't wright a review on the previous chapters because i was really caught up in the story :P so keep working on it really i mean it :D
| Just another fan P chapter 18 . 4/19/2012
wow this is a reaaaalllyyyyyy good story when will the next chapter come? i'm so curious
| Jerui chapter 18 . 4/10/2012
That's it? Moooooore. XD
just seen this fiction today. I totally love it. The emotions were just right, even the yaoi moments are perfectly situated. You described falling in love in a stunning manner, esp. Between two guys.