Reviews for Forgotten Moments
InuYasha's author chapter 3 . 5/22/2011
hehehehe, sounds funny what does jake do?
ImGonnaHaveAHouseParty chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
that should've been in the move! XD
Amy chapter 5 . 7/13/2010
Thanks for the story! Iv always wanted to know what the script originally said about Trudy and Norm
fullmoonrisin chapter 5 . 7/8/2010
If you watch avatar closely it seems that parts of the original Norm/Trudy story managed to make it into the final cut. In several of Jake's video logs Norm is either Ogling Trudy or at her bunk talking to her. Also, he seems to have some knowledge of flying that is never explained in the final cut.
E. Taylor chapter 5 . 6/10/2010
This is promising. I think you could've done so much more with this, though. Instead of just changing moments directly from the script, take them, and turn them into entire scenes. Add background details, what happened before and after. Stuff like that. I do think this was a good idea, however.
sylar1610 chapter 5 . 6/10/2010
This was a beautiful except for the end it was very sad when Trudy died