Reviews for Hair Distraction
Sakura's Unicorn chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
Well crafted! I don't usually dip into Neji/Tenten fics (I don't oppose them, it's just that SasuSaku is my OTP), but I was referred to your story by fanofthisfiction and I have to thank her for it! You create so much feeling, supply so much history, in such a tiny space. Ha! You even inserted a literal tiny space! Amazing!

I'm in awe of how you build Tenten's frustration level by contrasting Neji's hair with her own and how their hair actually BECOMES them; Tenten's compact buns become her no-nonsense, practical self while Neji's arrogance is symbolized in the way his hair flies loosely (his level of genius does not require restrained hair). To then have Neji use his hair's distraction potential deliberately...and for romantic reasons! Perfect.

Thanks for sharing this great read!
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
How you can completely captivate and command a scene in so few words is a testament to your superb writing talents. Loved this one!
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
XD Oh Neji.
Love it!
Keep writing!
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Aha that sly Hyuuga
Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Lol, that makes sooooo much sense, i was thinking of something else entirely... but i can't remember what now, um...

Well, that was sooooo nunu
Lil'MissEya chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Crazycally chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
naughty neji
darkstar616 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
love this story!
CosmicCorruption chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
This. Was. Hilarious. I love love love your writing style, and I adore the line, "She steeled her resolve and fantasized about setting Neji's head on fire as tendrils played across her mouth and practically used her saliva for conditioner."

Brilliant. I'll read more of your fics when I have the time, this one just caught my eye :)
Ioga chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Death by choking on hair! I loved Tenten's attitude about her own hair. Very sensible, very identifiable. I got most distracted during the hair-in-nose paragraph, it's a bit fuzzy with all the different points of view in one and knowledge of the mission coming as a new thing there to boot.

Thanks for this!
MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Haha Neji is a pervert! Neji is a pervert! Hes such a pervert...

TheSweetRevenge chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Insane-Serenity Ice Queen chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
LOOOOOVED it! and it was so funny at the end i was laughing and thinking: see! even the great hyugas are pervs! Don't worry uchihas you guys aren't alone! Sasuke no wonder Neji's your other best friend he's a perv too!
LuxaLucifer chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I shall now be looking for Kakashi's Porn Shop. Oh, yeah, the fanfiction. That was great! I've always loved Neji's hair...On a certain game, you can make him jump and his hair will go through his body. With Kakashi, you can make his hand look like he's masterbating. Just saying.
yamikinoko chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
"Neji's copping a feel" was the first thing that came to my mind when I read this.

(In hindsight, I suppose that's rather accurate.)

This is a perfectly believable [haha] reason as to why Neji has such a ridiculously un-ninja hairstyle. Delightfully creative. ;]
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