|Reviews for You're Not Worthless|
| Sleepless Demon chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Very great story, wouldn't have rated it as a K with that sort of description but I enjoyed it very much. Peace out.
| Mewmewpowergirl12 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
You should really make a sequel really
It s great !
| OctobersAutumn chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
aaaaaawwwwwww. .it. it's in character and fluffy and cute and yet not too cliche. Would you please make a sequel? :D
| Anime Freak456 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
this was uber cute! i loved it! Good kob on details of him watching her sleep. but just to let you know: it's Shukaku! lol
| virgointhestars chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Cute story~! Well done XD
| Lindy Rose chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
First of all: !
Second of all, because I definetly very much like your writing, I want to give you some ConCrit: The second paragraph was VERY awkward
here, I shalt showeth you
She was the only woman who had ever gotten anywhere near him and not made a complete fool of themselves trying to become his wife, aside from his sister(placing the sister bit earlier in the sentence would make it flow better). The intensity that filled her eyes when she wanted something attracted her to him(I take the is to mean it made her attractive to him? cause if so you would want to switch the her and him). The stubbornness of her attracted him(Her stubbornness would flow better and you could try switching around the word attracted, attractive ect with some synonyms). Her body, which never attracted him to anybody else, got to him too(just a very strange sentence...the idea gets across but after reading the rest of your story I know you can make it sould alot better and make the language really MOVE if you know what I mean). This woman was like none he had ever seen before. He watched her still form.(paragraph breack was STRANGE)
Not trying to be mean in anyway ok? I really quite liked your story, I just know the very begining of the story is really important for drawing the reader in and alot of people stop reading if they don't like it enough in the first few seconds so I wanted to give you a leg up
Very ggod work AR!
| JustCallMeWhatever chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Gaara is just the cutest little panda ever!
I enjoyed reading it.
| miikodesu chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
that's so sweet 3 so in character, especially gaara _
too bad this is just oneshots :(
i want to know about sakura's reaction more, because it wasnt nice dream _
| Angelusfaith chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
_ Very sweet of him.
| langniappe chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
I was smiling all the way through this. It was too cute.
Keep it up _