|Reviews for Lone Wolves|
| prose.titute chapter 2 . 7/1
I have re-read your fic Lone Wolves repeatedly for over 5 years. It is so obvious how it won the United Colours of Twilight comp! This pairing is one of my fave interracial fictional rare-pairs. I think you will do it tremendous justice. I know time is passing and you're well into your 20s and have a lot of commitments but I implore you to return to this story. It has great potential.
The AU/AH element is originalised here with Jasper's war hero status, and Leah as a spokesperson from her community that can speak in clear English. Your writing is so eloquent. All the descriptions are richly detailed and sensual. Your first chapter always makes me happy-sad. I love it.
Pleeeeeeease don't leave us hanging with that tease at the end of chapter 2. LET US HEAR ABOUT THE GUESTS! ;) I wonder who it could be? :P
| Cricket-moon chapter 2 . 10/14/2013
Wow. This is excellent. It really is! I would read this over twilight any time. Just change the names(or not, I bet no one would figure it out) and you could publish it!
| brankel1 chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
| THEPrincessx chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
What a Cliffy! Update soon!
| Regin chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
| recey2010 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Omg what are u doing why u haven't u updated this story is too perfect to b abandoned the only of it's kind but it seems such an obvious way to create the pairing I love it please update asap
| grrlinterrupted chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
This is one of the most beautifully written fics I've ever been lucky enough to stumble across. The depth of atmosphere and emotion you create is breathtaking, and I'm currently urging everyone on my Twitter list to read it. Utterly, stunningly good.
| PiperBlue chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Wow! I love, love, love this story! I really hope you do continue, I desperately want to know what happens with these two! : ) This o/s story is pretty amazing, it has the foundation to be an epically fantastic multi-chapter, if you are so inclined (which it seemed you may have been at one point by your opening authors note). Thank you for sharing this wonderful story!
| 4everEllen chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
love it!update soon!
| prose.titute chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Please hurry up with the (happy and sexy) ending!
If possible, make this longer than a two shot! (It's SOOOOOOOO good! It won for a reason didn't it?)
| xXMikkaXx chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Awesome love it!
| XMillieX chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Perfect! Everything was perfect! It was brilliant writing, wonderfully paced, and I love it! XXX
| artbeatsandlife chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
excellent story, of course. i was one of the judges on the UCoT contest, and it was outstanding. are you on twitter? i'd like to follow you.
| amore1993 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
it's not bad. do u think you could write more chapters? i really like the idea of cherokee leah that meets major jasper :)
could u do something like:
' he knew her when he was human, she dies, reincarnates, he remembers her, etc...'?
| Ada104 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010