Sakura's growth is just lovely!

understandably a bit of an abrupt end given the circumstances, but I like that you chose to finish the story instead of leaving it hanging :] I also liked how you chose to show the new future slotting into place~

This is a really lovely story! Thank you so much for writing this!

Hey! I loved this fic, and it was so disheartening to see so many of the reviews you got were negative! I want you to know I found this on a rec list and it definitely deserves to be there. Loved the Kakashi focus, and how you honored the characters in allowing them to adapt. I admit I am a little sad at the abrupt ending, I know if you'd had the time to spare this story would be so fun to follow, but the way you pulled it off is satisfying and left me with some ploy bunnies for filling out some time.

Really appreciate the time, effort, and potential you put in to this fic, gonna go check out the others.

Pretty sure Sasuke's Chakra affinity is Lightning, not Fire...

This chapter brings up an interesting idea: If Kakashi is painfully aware of his lack of feminine understanding, why not learn and practice the Oiroke no Jutsu (forewarning the otherwise murderous kunoichi of the village) and find out?

El sharingan, el ojo maldito que para hacerse mas fuerte te quita lo que mas aprecias, y cuyo uso te quita la luz de la vida usado para realizar cirugías y salvar vidas como mera herramienta secundaria... la ironía de eso es deliciosa, y que paso con Itachi?

I think I preferred the Great Naruto Bridge...

kakashi/iruka? trash fic

good story

I get that he is young. But why has no one given Naruto the brutal truth of life? He behaves like an idiot, he dresses like an idiot and talks like an idiot. Ninja are weapons, especially him. He is the ninja equivalent to a WMD but acts like a circus act.

He treats it like a joke, and messes around instead of training. Imagine if a soldier would just screw around and make pranks etc. while training in boot campnever taking anything seriously. He would be booted out of the army so fast he wouldn't realise what happened.

Naruto is the personification of the class clown mixed with the village idiot. I never understand how he goes from someone you clearly has several mental disabilities to a serious, and sharp minded, NinjaSage later on... Anime are often weird like that when it comes to the main characters.

i expected more,
this fic won't be going into my folder of favourites thats for sure.

it was pretty decent though I guess.

kind of unimpressed with Kakashi so far tbh. its okay, but hes treading canon too closely and his decisions are pretty boring

NARUTOOOOOOOOOOO SO CUTE

Not nominating them is a bad decision.
With naruto's new sensory abilities, stage 2 would be a JOKE. you hear me? a JOKE. Being able to sense everyone makes the forest of death part a KYUUBI SIZED CAKEWALK . cept for the orochimaru parts of course.

of course, they have much less combat power, thanks to another bad decision Kakashi made in forcing sasuke into "being a medic" wtf.

kakashi could solve orochimaru problem easily without postponing the exam tho