|Reviews for Teach Your Children Well|
| Elise chapter 22 . 3/6
Great story. :) Thank you very much for writing it.
| UNCPanda chapter 19 . 3/7
It was used forRemus lupin in harry Potter, I like the story by the way :)
| melissa.hanung chapter 22 . 3/7
Usually I think of my time I spent to read fanfiction as an "investment". Let say my investment bears no fruit this time. A sloppy finish... though I understand it needs to be done.
I take back all my reviews... I wrote them all to help you improve your work but it seems that it's unlikely you'll write a fanfic again, considering your work and all... well. Good luck with your double job!
| melissa.hanung chapter 17 . 3/7
Why Shukaku appeared early? "Time travel" means re-relieving events that already happened. If no butterfly effects took place, it should be repeating the exact pattern it happened the first time.
Unlike with Kabuto's death, I don't think Kakashi did anything to trigger a shukaku appearance... so why?
On to the next chapter!
| melissa.hanung chapter 16 . 3/7
I knew it. To prevent the curse-mark, right? I won't nominate my team either
| melissa.hanung chapter 15 . 3/7
Great Sasuke Bridge! Well played, sasuke!
| melissa.hanung chapter 14 . 3/7
Whoaaa! What's sasuke doiiiingg lighting the scroooll
| melissa.hanung chapter 13 . 3/7
Ahh... this chapter and the chapter before are interesting! So things had begun to change now? I'm liking your sasuke,, good job good job
| melissa.hanung chapter 10 . 3/7
Umm.. "Suck it up. See ya, don't let the door hit ya on the way out" is the phrase really so important to be noted here?
On topic though,, poor Sasuke! He's the only one that gets NO training from Kakashi! aww... I hope Kakashi will forgive him soon... though he technically haven't sinned yet xD
| melissa.hanung chapter 9 . 3/7
When wondering about WHO had been teaching Naruto secretly... Kakashi should've immediately thought about Iruka... shouldn't he? I mean, that's the most logical explanation, right? Kakashi only thought about Iruka as a protective mother hen and a 'capable guardian'. It's strange that Kakashi didn't even think of this possibility.
| melissa.hanung chapter 8 . 3/7
For a story with only 37,849 words to get 3,087 reviews so far is AWESOME.
Please keep up the good work, I know you can grow into a MUCH BETTER writer. This fic still lacking... things. But you have the potential. Please keep learning how to write and convey a story or idea... and probably longer chapter?
Also did Kakashi frame Kabuto? Wow... how low can this kakashi stoop
| melissa.hanung chapter 7 . 3/7
Canon!Kakashi is not that dense. He knew how Sakura felt, he did. Your Kakashi is supposed to be a canon!Kakashi with more harship than he can handle, but still canon. So he should've known how Sakura felt and how she acted like that. (Oh and if you forgot what chapter 7 was about, it was when Sakura landed a hit on Sasuke, and kakashi consult asuma and kurenai because he didn't get why sakura cried afterwards)
| melissa.hanung chapter 6 . 3/7
? This chapter is too short... And things changed. Why are they changed? Why Naruto changed? Oh so much questions! On to the next chapter
| melissa.hanung chapter 5 . 3/7
Er... Canon!Sasuke's reason in being shinobi definitely "to avenge his kin, to wipe away the memory of my clan so it's purified and that no one will look down at them again."
Kakshi didn't make a mistake in thinking like that... but why did you make this sasuke seems to be 'better' than the canon!sasuke? Is it because you need a reason to make Kakashi changed his mind?
I personally hope Sasuke will be a better one than your future!sasuke
| melissa.hanung chapter 4 . 3/7
It's like the ever-present hypothetical question of "If you can go back in time, will you kill Hitler?" Well.
I wonder... if this is normal fic, the path Kakashi would most likely taken is to be kind and tried to change Sasuke to the better. But that will be hard because your Future!Sasuke is one plain evil man... Your sasuke is NOT a canon Sasuke, so Kakashi won't be a canon Kakashi.
You really going to kill Sasuke huh? Well,, on to next chapter!