|Reviews for Teach Your Children Well|
| Thedevilsangel chapter 22 . 10/6
OMG LOVE YOUR FANFICTION SO MUCH WISH THERE WAS MORE SO I COULD CONTINUE READING IT FOREVER THEN REREAD IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN. LIKE KAKASHI AND HIS MAKE OUT SERIES! HA! I'M GOOD AT STUFF LIKE THAT. CURRENTLY LISTENING TO MOTZART OR BEETHOVEN AS I WRITE AND I WAS LISTENING THE WHOLE TIME I READ, OR AT LEAST FOR THE MOST PART. LOVE YA WRITIN' STYLZ!
| Kakashi lover chapter 22 . 10/5
It was so nice now that everything went right naruto can be hokage ne?
| 0118999881999119725.3 chapter 22 . 10/4
A very intriguing story up until the end - as you said, you made it your final chapter so you wouldn't feel bad for ditching it to do life. As a result, there were some loose ends and the wrap-up was a bit idealistic for me, but having said that, I still enjoyed it and as a reader I appreciate that you finished it instead of taking time off and never coming back.
Also, it was nice that romance wasn't a heavy focus in any part of the fic - I felt I was able to enjoy it more because it was only hinted at throughout. I feel like there are so many time-travel fics that end up being about closing the age gap for the writer's OTP and while that's okay, it can detract from a story.
Anyway, rant over. You're awesome, 'kay?
| AHAH chapter 15 . 9/23
Nearly died laughing. "The Great Sasuke Bridge." Someone's gonna have to photoshop his head onto it, because I swear that line is one of fanfiction's greatest.
| WinchesterNimrod chapter 13 . 9/12
daymn, you are one awesome writer. Love this character development!
| SaltWaterSwimmer29 chapter 22 . 9/11
I was a little worried when I read this was your last chapter, but you pulled it off really well! I expected the worst - get to the end of the chapter and it says something like, life continued on and some of their adventures were different but everything worked out. I was so happy with your end though! The whole time jump idea was fantastic! Great job, really!
| BlackMoonNight chapter 22 . 9/9
I'm not sure what to think about the ending. It's not bad, it's just...very unexpected. Though I guess that should be a good thing. While a good majority of other authors have ended their time-travel stories on happy notes where everyone lived and no one turned traitor before, the way you went about it was different. A new spin on an old trick. For that I thank you.
Then there's that part of me where I feel as if I was cheated out of something. The awkwardness and hilarity that no doubt had happened during the process of Kakashi and Iruka courting each other. Not to mention the, again, no doubt good amount of smut. Was a scene of either or better yet, both, to much to ask for? *cries childishly* Oh well, guess I'll just have to find it somewhere else. *grumble, grumble*
Anyway, this was good read. Glad I saw it.
| Ileah chapter 22 . 8/30
Great story! I didn't expect Kamui to reverse the time travel jutsu. That was a cool idea.
| K chapter 3 . 8/27
You didn't have to justify Naruto being a natural charka sensor that hard. Karin is Naruto s cousin, I think, and it could have easily been an overlooked Uzumaki Clan ability.
| Great chapter 22 . 8/25
An interesting story although the ending was abrupt. Oh well, Looking forward to more!
| Jay chapter 1 . 8/24
U suck...firstly Naruto cnt die he is the child of prophecy...duh...and whats up with yoi?reli ur pairings suck big time...kakashi wouldnt kill haku bcuz haku was the reason naruto formend his Shinobi way...like u suck big time...what u just did was destroy the original timeline of what ever future u whre hoping to create...
| KK chapter 19 . 8/21
Furry little problem joke? Well it's probably been referenced to Naruto in fanfiction but it comes from Harry Potter book 5 and it's what James Potter jokingly called Lupin's monthly wolf-like problem.
| Bronze Leaf chapter 22 . 8/18
I actually really don't mind this being the end. It was perfect length!
Thanks for your hard work!
| konoitami chapter 22 . 8/5
WHAT WTHHAT WHHHAAAAAATT
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/2
I just can't shake the somewhat disturbing thought a Nurse Sasuke.