Cool idea but weirdly executed. You flipped their roles around which while original makes no sense. The best logical team 7 that a futre kakashi would train would be close-naruto mid-sasuke and healing-sakura. Make sure they all can fight close, all have some elemental jutsu, and a special talent of their own, healing (sakura), fuinjutsu (naruto), archery or something else long rang3 (sasuke).

good story. total copout ending, but it works in a weird way. all in all i like it good work.

Wow. I loved that ending! This whole thing was awesome! I'm so happy with how you did this.

A Naruto without his nindo is not Naruto. Sure Naruto’s gotten stronger but he doesn’t have the life motto that pushes him to be stronger thus makes him able to befriend almost everyone he meets.

Yeah, best not to give the Snake easy access to Sasuke.

This was awesome!
It was so well thought out and I’m so glad about how everything turned out!
Hahhaha who would’ve thought that Sasuke would end up as a medic?
I loved this!

Thanks for ending the book! I loved it a lot and other people would had just left us hanging. Cya .

"well, hes Naruto" Love your book .

Thank you for finding a nice way to wrap this up instead of abandoning it! Very enjoyable story and a nice go-back-and-fix-it fic.

This was awesome! I wasn't expecting that ending, but I' with it. Thanks for sharing!

"furry little problem" comes from harry potter, it's used to refer to lupin's lycanthropy. So if you didn't read in in a naruto fic, you might have read it in a sirius black / remus lupin fic. well you probably got the answer to your question ages ago, though.

you know what? it was real of you to drop this fic when you knew you couldnt give it any more time than itd need. good on you for not spreading yourself too thin. as far as fix-it fics go, i loved the ideas within this one. particularly that sasuke is given a meaningful role outside of his heritage, and that sakura is given the attention and support for her literal kick ass potential that her canon character desperately needs. yes, in canon she still literally kicks ass, but as a woman she is still definitely expected to fulfill certain more maternal roles bc masashi kisimoto and shonen jump dont know how to write good female chars. thank you for sharing ur lil vision in the chapter detailing the stuff youd envision them doing in kakashis successful alt. timeline. applause for you, writer!

young sakura being groomed to absolutely body bitches... and young sasuke.. harvesting healing roots... i am so. so so so soft. thank you for this.

and sakura! as a taijutsu specialist! this is so good i cannot. and naruto has that uzumaki chakra so i mean bejng a sensor feels reaaallly meta.

medic! sasuke! ahhh! i love it!