Reviews for Teach Your Children Well |
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narutodippy chapter 1 . 1/14/2021 I'm already hooked |
shinobabe chapter 22 . 1/9/2021 It's a nice time traveling fix it story from Kakashi's POV. it's especially refreshing since so many are centered around Naruto Sakura and Sasuke. It's always about saving as many people as they can for them (Zabuza, Haku), but Kakashi was swift and efficient and he doesn't leave them an escape route. It's really makes sense to be honest, with his personality being like that. More interestingly, Kakashi's urge to kill Sasuke is a surprise and I've never really thought about it that way but it does make sense. Good job on giving us a view on Kakashi's POV! |
CagedHeart7 chapter 22 . 11/12/2020 THIS. WAS. AMAZING. There are so few good time travel fics which are actually complete...and that's understandable cuz what with 220 episodes of Naruto and 500 of Shippuden, having to modify and rewrite each incident ..it'll take a lifetime! But I totally loved the way you've ended it. It was really fun to read with good n practical solutions to most problems. I wonder what happened with Itachi and Akatsuki though. But still...lovely! 3 |
Camila Diaz1 chapter 13 . 10/27/2020 Me causa gracia la forma de pensar de Sakura, es muy graciosa. |
ZaffreAmethyst chapter 5 . 10/4/2020 Aah I can't tell you how relieved I was when I read that Kakashi didn't intend to kill Sasuke right away anymore. And I love his little interaction with Iruka at Ichiraku... especially what Iruka said to him regarding children 3 |
Auxillium chapter 10 . 9/7/2020 You did a good job writing this and honestly that's very sexy of you. |
Haruko92 chapter 22 . 9/4/2020 I was scared when i got to the last chapter but I was relieved to find it was an excellent ending. Tbh. Idk what else could have been written as it feels fitting to end it the way you did. Your authors note in my opinion wasn't needed because you described Kakashi's thought process so well. However it was appreciated for the extra details. Anyway, thanks for sharing this. It was fun to read. |
Guest chapter 14 . 8/31/2020 Like. How dumb. How dumb do you have to be To give an explosive scroll To a crazy, bloodthirsty brat? How dumb can you be |
2ilver8ox chapter 22 . 8/18/2020 Such a good story! While I wished I could see more Kakashi adventures I still really liked how you choose to end! 10/10 would read again. |
Lord Vaserious chapter 2 . 8/11/2020 Good that Kashi has saved Naruto from his ratty apartment. |
Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 8/11/2020 Yesssss thisgreat! |
Detsella Morningdew chapter 22 . 7/1/2020 I mean, technically, you didn't need the M/M pairing warning. You didn't actually make the pairing. There might have been SLIGHT indications that they would get together eventually. But really, there wasn't much actually there. So for people who don't like those pairings (despite what you say will happen in the future), this still isn't going to be a dealbreaker for them. (Only reason I might get annoyed at M/M pairings is that often, they take up about half of the fic's content, or they don't, but literally every single ninja needs to be gay and also in a relationship. It can get tiring. But it's not terrible when done better, even though it isn't my thing.) Anyway, good on you for finishing this fic sooner rather than letting it die. And it wasn't even as rushed as that usually goes. A little shaky on pacing, but overall a great ending, and a pretty satisfying one. |
Detsella Morningdew chapter 19 . 7/1/2020 I believe that "furry little problem" was first coined in Harry Potter (or at least made popular there), by the Marauders to talk about Moony's werewolf condition while being fairly secretive and avoiding as much guilt as possible. I'm not surprised that many people started referring to Naruto's condition in much the same way. |
Detsella Morningdew chapter 3 . 7/1/2020 Kurama gave Naruto sensor powers later on, anyway, so having latent chakra-sensing abilities works well for him. Good cohesion of powers. |
Detsella Morningdew chapter 1 . 7/1/2020 GREAT start. You establish the AU, provide a compelling motivation for our main character, and give just enough information for readers to want to continue. (Also, I like the premise. ;D) |