|Reviews for Those Who Watch|
| Wai-Jing Waraugh chapter 1 . 4/12
This was sad, but very sweet. I like the way you show George and Alanna comforting each other, while simultaneously dealing with their own sense of loss. George's interest in 'Alan' at the beginning of 'First Adventure' was rather sudden, so it's good to see how you elaborated his first impression of her to explain it. I wonder what was running through his head when he saw those gold sparks and thought she was a boy! ;P
| Heiress of Lohaust chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
It was really sweet. I liked how George explained to Alanna that the whole situation wasn't her fault, and I liked that Alanna has kept some of her sarcasm.
| Queen of Tortall chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
That was so sweet! Alanna and George are older, but I like how they haven't changed much and are still completely lovable. Great job!
| Myrtle chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Wow! This is the best oneshot I've read in ages! I love your characterizations and your dialog and especially the way you make it feel like they're really at Pirate Swoop. And the ending was perfect XD
| shinkan neko85 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Awww... that was so cute... great one shot...
| Unlike-me chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Well done! I really like the idea that she was shining - it makes sense. And George (well, you) actually succeeded finding a way to make her believe it wasn't her fault that Aly ended up in the Copper Isles. Smiling at the screen)