|Reviews for MidnightTeal Speck|
| Guideline Love chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
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| LatiosFan chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Ah, this sheds some light on the poem in which you already mentioned a second kiss. Nice touch.
I think you should try to combine these small "specks" into a story with more chapters. Then you could explain why Ash was chasing his dark self, perhaps starting with a call by Brandon, informing Ash that by accident the King of Pokelantis was freed again, and may be heading his way. And tell what happens after both "Ashes" have kissed Angie. Perhaps a little rivalry may occur, Ash's alter ego forcing Ash into having a Pokémon battle against him and the winner gets Angie.
This little storyline inspires me, it would a waste to have a (I think) nice idea not reach it's full potential.