Reviews for The Iris of my Eye
Fenrisa chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I love this take on Iris. In the books, Gabriel said he killed and loved her, and I always wondered how he came to love her. It's an amazing one-shot and lets your mind wander. Even if this isn't what L.J Smith envisioned(or if she envisioned anything at all), it's always great to read possible things that could have happened that the author didn't go into detail about. I look forward to reading more of your work.
MidnightRose24 chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
That was really cute and sweet. I like how realistic you are. Great job!
mia chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
The ending was bitter swett with Iris putting the flower on the counter
jade chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Poor Gab it is not your fault
SJess chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Not exactly how the story goes but creative and nicely written. :D Well Done!
colourfulchatterbox chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I liked it :)

Were you following the actual story or were you putting your own take on it?

In L. J Smith's Dark Visions, Iris is a pyschic as well :D

But I do really like your version, it makes Gabriel seem even more a wounded bird :P

Keep writing and I'll be reading and reviewing :D