| Reviews for Summer Vacation |
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  TwiFicLover11 chapter 531 . 1/20/2022 I like this story because of its innocence and coming-of-age tale. However, I'm reading this story over again, and now that I am older I can clearly see that Bella makes a lot of drama. She makes issues out of things that shouldn't be issues, and she does a lot of stuff for attention. In addition, she is a very contradictory person. One minute she is bragging about being confident and mature and the next minute she is acting very immature and insecure. She constantly picks fights with Edward, and she seems very ungrateful and spoiled at times. I'm not sure if her character was meant to be written as selfish, but that is just how she comes across. Personally, I think it takes away from the rest of the story, but again, it's a coming-of-age tale, and I am looking forward to the growth in the other stories. I am curious to know the thought process behind her character. This is just my assessment of Bella's character, but the story is amazing overall. This is one that would be really good for young adults to read. |
 arthemys chapter 600 . 5/18/2021 Wow, what an awesome story! Totally angst-free and so sweet! I loved it from beginning to end! I must admit that I hesitated reading it, with the sheer number of words and chapters, but I took a leap of faith, and I don't regret it! And I'm diving headfirst into the sequel tonight! ;) Thanks so much for this awesome work! |
| Emo4 chapter 600 . 4/20/2021 I still love your story, it's been a while since I last read it. My only question is, where does Edward and Bella get all their money? Bella doesn't seem to spend much but Edward, wow! Flowers, vacations, hotels, rental cars, and misc presents, that adds up. Was it left over accumulated money given by their parents during the college year that they didn't spend? I'm just curious. ANYWAYS, thanks for sharing this story and all the time you put into it. Onto the sequel. |
| IloveyouRob chapter 2 . 7/9/2020 *sigh* most of these twilight stories Of Edward and Bella’s relationship are the reason i have high expectations for the guys i date lol your Edward is so sweet and caring ! |
| IloveyouRob chapter 1 . 7/9/2020 Oh my Jesus! I was so excited when i came across your story! I remember back in 2010 when I first came across fanfiction for twilight and your story was one of the first ones i read! I didn’t have a page back then to save the story so when i came across it again a couple of weeks ago i just had to start reading it all over again! |
| Jane chapter 256 . 6/14/2020 When will Edward propose?! |
| Jane chapter 244 . 6/14/2020 Why did Edward use the pink, strawberry shampoo?! |
| Scarlett chapter 218 . 6/13/2020 Looks like I’m not the only one who wants to wait until I’m married to do that... |
| Guest chapter 108 . 6/11/2020 Who is Heidi?! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2019 I can't wait for the next chapter on Happily Ever After. I guess in the mean time I will read this again. |
| Emo4 chapter 600 . 9/26/2019 Yay! Can't wait for the sequel. That was such a sweet story. |
| Emo4 chapter 499 . 9/24/2019 Only 100 ch. to go. I love how the characters have developed. I can't wait for the sequel! |
| Emo4 chapter 429 . 9/23/2019 B & E's first time was well written. I guess I mean realistic, no stars and magic just a real first time. I'm still loving the story... |
| Emo4 chapter 408 . 9/23/2019 Awww Robert the cat! I grew up in a huge extended family this is a great story. Still going strong. lol |
| Emo4 chapter 353 . 9/22/2019 What a sweet proposal! |