Hey
I'm reading this story for the second time, and honestly, it's frickin awesome!
But I have to read it in doses due to the fact that it's so damn sweet, it makes me nauseous... Not in a bad way, though!
I've read other Twilight fanfics, and they're mostly senseless lemons... So it's refreshing to read one that's so... well, sweet.
Keep rockin'!
XOXO,
Blah

Nice chapter

the irony

this is such a good book!

That was very sweet. I love long stories because I, too, get attached to the characters. Glad there is more.

Mickey

Finally I know! YAY he's a virgin too.

Did Edward sleep with Jessica or have any physical relationship with her?

Why doesn't Edward ever run into people he went to school with? He should know almost everyone in Forks so it's not realistic that he never see anyone he knew from school.

Is Edward a virgin also? It only said he had 1 short term girlfriend.

Are we going to learn what Renee said to Edward?

I hope Renee doesn't come back or if she does Bella totally goes off on her. She is no mother.

I think this story is very sweet.

Alice is a little shit.

Bella is very ungrateful, and she sounds like a spoiled witch.

Bella is a very selfish character in this story. She thinks only of herself, constantly picks fights, and lives for drama. She also cries too much. It's like she always does or says something wrong, but Edward ends up apologizing to her. He constantly has to watch what he says and does because she'll end up crying, overreacting, or getting upset. Not to mention that she is hypocritical about him talking to her but she walks away every chance she gets. If this story was real life Edward probably would have broken up with her by now or someone would have had to tell her about herself.

Otherwise, this is still a good story to read. The plot is great, and it's an easy read that does bring some happiness.