|Reviews for Haunted|
| Shvon chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
*shoves motivation in your general direction with all these reviews!* :D
Aw, she passed out, poor girl. D: I think I would, too. I'd be exhausted after that encounter.
And I actually laughed at "Y-Your eyes a-are lavender!" "Yes, and what point are you seeking to prove?" "Boy, was he bipolar!" XD; At least she's noticed now. :B This will be fun.
Onoez slight cliffhanger. D: But great chapter. 3 ... you should update soon. :3
| Shvon chapter 3 . 7/15/2010
AND NOW THE FUN BEGINS.
I think I enjoyed the Kelsi!abuse way more than I should have. Hold on, worrying for my own mental health, brb-
No, no, in all seriousness, this chapter was proof of how much of an amazing author you are. o_o It was honestly scary and you are WAY too good at writing Yami Marik. The "my eternal puppet" bit even made me shudder a bit. :c
| Shvon chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
"You need to wait at least 15 seconds before submitting another review." Sometimes, I implode the system.
Oohh, I see the "I have no clue I just said something via my Yami" thing going on here. xD I utterly love that idea, hence why Malik does it in IYM. Imagining a curious/confused Marik was way too cute when he was like "I said 'I hope to see you around', did I not?"
Poor Marik, he seems rather like Erik here. :c "Now leave me." That made me sad. Makes me wonder how she didn't note his eye colour (at this point in time), though. XD I guess she was too creeped out or something.
| Shvon chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Another wall of reviews, 'cause I read this all last night but was too tired to review, so I'm gonna review each chapter. Thankfully it's not like, 7 to go through this time. XD
Poor Kelsi. :/
I honestly laughed at the psychiatrist's name, "June Summers", because earlier in the chapter you said "It was the sixth of June, and she sighed as she pleaded for summer's weather to finally present itself." IT'S JUNE AND SHE'S HOPING FOR SUMMER'S WEATHER. JUNE SUMMERS!
Ksorry I'm aware I'm obnoxious. XD
Great prologue. 3
| Shadow Dice chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
*gasp* How dare he! I take a frying pan to him if he was going to hit me (I'd make sure to miss the face though ;3) This keeps getting darker and darker! Keep up the goodwork Rugrat!
| Crimson Puppetmaster chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
I read the note on your page and now I understand your slow updates, must be hard even though you didn't really like him in the first place. :( But please don't give up on Haunted. You do a really good job despite the fact I don't like the idea of her going to a psyciatrist. Keep up the good work!
| HexeYuki chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
Ha, the eyes ARE a dead giveaway. :P
Aw, poor Kelsi. She's jumpy and terrified. Here's a cookie to calm her down :D
| BlueFox of the Moon chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
Huzzuh ! Im alive ! xD Le gasp Marik was about to hit her ? o.O bad, boy, bad ! -shakes fist before running behind Rugrat- Good job on this ! :]
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
:o..he was gonna hit her...
can't wait to read more
update soon :D
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
Ooooh,...he never answered that first inquiry...it bothers me for some reason...
| Mahersal chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
Ho-ly crap. Your writing is absolutly beautiful. The flow of the words, the vivid details...just so amazing. This, by far, has to be one of the darkest stories I have ever read on this site. I am loving every bit of this chilling tale.
And it has Yami Marik! WOO HOO!
| Shadow Dice chapter 3 . 6/12/2010
Whoa...o.o this is...even creepier than the first O.o and I'm didn't think that was even possible! Anyways, creepiness aside, this story is going great :3 you're pumping the chapters out like no tomorrow! Yet another awesome story, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| PsychopathicPrincess chapter 3 . 6/12/2010
GAH! THAT LAST LINE!I LOVE IT!
i got so pulled into this :D
UPDATE SOON! :D
(btw i just realized...i've spelt my own screen name wrong :O )
| HexeYuki chapter 3 . 6/12/2010
One word... woah. 0.0
Again, you potray Kelsi's fear very clearly but also in subtle manner... great job again! I look forward to more!
| HexeYuki chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
Ooh Eerie. I think Kelsi is handling this much better than I would be, XD
And I wonder what Marik meant... hm. Either way he needs to work on his social skills. Tsk, Tsk. *shakes head*