|Reviews for The Black Magician Trilogy Alternate Ending|
| jaimel13 chapter 34 . 12/18/2014
I adore your work and I can't believe you haven't updated this story since 2011!
| kasiaeliza chapter 34 . 10/6/2014
Hey, where is next chapter? You left Your readers in half of strory...
| Katsumi-phoenix chapter 34 . 5/2/2014
Wow... I just read all the chapters and I love how you change the story _ Hope you continue soon _ I would like to read all the new ideas you have for the battle and the end _
| Asta chapter 34 . 1/18/2014
Thank you. Dannyl is my favorit person in the Series. The Way rothan found out was great
| lee chapter 23 . 1/17/2014
| dina chapter 19 . 1/17/2014
I like the long chapter. thank you for this great story cuss i did not relly like the end in the books this is better
| Chrissie chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Really love your fanfic! Been reading plenty of alternative endings/proceedings out there and there is no other fanfic better than yours! Really hope that life is not too harsh on you and that you are taking care of yourself - as the rest of us are anticipating with excitement for the continuation of your lovely fanfic. So you better take care of your well-being so you are able to return to us!
| Guest chapter 34 . 10/29/2013
| Johanna chapter 11 . 10/21/2013
Be carefull with your grammar, you are mixing different tenses when you write. I really love this much better than the real ending but it sometimes gets confusing when you write in past/present etc tenses.. :)
| MariaKatharina chapter 34 . 10/1/2013
Please, finish the story! It's a really good Fanfic, I am dying to know how it ends! Please, update soon!
| Perko chapter 34 . 8/28/2013
Brilliant story...you have filled in the areas that Trudi left to our imagination...tip of the hat to your Akkarin/Sonea scenes.
| Safiya chapter 34 . 7/29/2013
So I found this after re-reading TBM trilogy for the 100th time and feeling slightly depressed that Akkarin died. I mean, I saw it coming and all, but it was still very sad. I've read alternative endings, but this is by far my favourite! I never thought that the truth read would be the pivotal point and well you've basically made me see the book in a completely different way! I will admit there are some aspects of this fic that I didn't really enjoy- how quickly Akkarin and Sonea 'got together', I preferred the build up in the original, but that's my opinion! I did appreciate the steamy parts, gosh, I will NOT be able to view Akkarin or Sonea in the same way again!
I've enjoyed so much in this fic, the way you tied in the original was beautiful to say the least, and I LOVED the Loren/Akkarin scene so much! This is the only fic that I can read without wincing or cringing because of the content and you write extremely well!
I, being a writer as well, know that it can sometimes get quite difficult to actually finish a story. You get busy, you find yourself distracted, you don't know how to finish it etc But listen up! Because I am here to tell you, you cannot leave this unfinished! No way do I allow you to do that, because this is tooo good and you're almost at the end as well!
A fan of your fanfic :)
| Aletheya chapter 34 . 4/20/2013
Well, this story has an interesting plot. I've always wanted Akkarin and Lorlen to survive, as I'm sure everyone else wanted. xD
You need better betas, though. No offense. xD There are still some orthographic and grammatical mistakes in need of a goos editing. Other than that, please keep going! Update soon!
| PiER chapter 34 . 4/8/2013
Woah! I've been slowly reading this over the weekend. I LOVE Akk/Son fics but there are so few out there. Even less with a promising plot! Your twist with Lorlen's truthread is proving most exciting. A truly interesting AU and it NEEDS updating. What other plans do the thieves have in store? What will become of our favourite pair? I doubt defeating Kariko will be as easy as we hope. The blood rings? And what of the Guild and the Higher Magicians when this is all over? What of their families? So many questions but sadly so few answers. Adding this to my alert in the hopes that one day you'll update.
| josiah275 chapter 34 . 3/15/2013
decent story although you could probably move the plot lines along a little faster