Reviews for Green Eyed Monster
FallingNarwhals chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
Whoa... That was deep... I LOVE IT!
Cookie-the-Rookie chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Wow... Great writing.
That must have hurt!
U.O. Zyzpm chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
One thing I always hated about the show was how lightly they took serious matters. If there had been more drama I think it would have been better show rather than the IMO poor humor they attempted to insert into the show.

You captured the drama of the change perfectly. Nice job! I never thought of how painful the whole transformation would have been until I read this.
60sec400 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Nice. Is this a one-shot? Becuase, it would be cool if you updated man. I kinda wanna know what Tucker and Sam's reaction will be to Danny. Or, maybe, you could make a sequal (hint, hint!) It's good though man, but, I have a question, are the italics supposed to be when they are talking? Becuase, I got confused there. But, other than that, it was good.
Lyssie212 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Dada-da-da-da, I'm lovin' it. Your stories of course. 0 And this one, it's so...amazing. Awesome. Epic. I love the way you explained the whole transformation. Descriptive, and wonderfully written. ;D Keep up the great work! 8D
OwlheadAthena chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Fudge I loved this :)
Borrow Your Soul chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
That last bit where you brought in the song was quite clever.
anonymous baka chapter 1 . 9/19/2010


That's...EXACTLY what it would've been like through Danny's eyes.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Well, that was dark all right. o_o
LeiaOrganicSolo chapter 1 . 6/18/2010

Yay! An angsty-ish drabble! My favorite!

Lol, really great, described the whole accident perfectly! As for that Dark Jak prison scene... Pretty please? XD

Soului chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I absolutely love this concept! I also love how you've done it. The way you've disjointed the thoughts and expressed the confusion that Danny's feeling was increadibly effective. I also love the line from the opening sequence at the end. It brings closure to the fic as well as emphasizing everything you've written before that line. Well done!

The only possible thing I can say is that the wording is a little formal and unwieldy at times. That line where you start talking about the 'goring of his being...everlasting agony' is definitely effective for description purposes, but the wording might be streamlined a bit for the sake of flow.

Other than that? Absolutely amazing!
Pii chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
...he can walk trough walls, disappear, and fly
dragondancer123 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Wow. Nice, just awesome. Kinda want more.

Hip to be Square,

anonymous chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
That's really good! But who knew Danny Fenton was that good with words? LOL!
TwiLyght Sans Sparkles chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Dark, but well-written. I liked it.
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