|Reviews for The Races|
| LaNaturalBreezeOf-Books chapter 14 . 11/10/2014
Fantastic piece of work! To finally give this story closure you should clear up the loose ends and write the ultimate reunion party with lots of PDA from the boys! I have to say, you played me like your personal violin. Whatever you wanted the reader to think I thought it! I was in total denial like Olli in the first chapter until the whole amnesia came to light. Danke gott! Can't believe Helena could do such a thing! Sweet academically groomed Helena von Lahnstein. Wow. Dankeschön for your imagination, the best story I've read on this site for Verbotene Liebe!
Alles Gute! xxx
| 7letcher chapter 14 . 3/5/2013
loved the story but i need to know where the footage came from that was shown at the funeral?
| 7letcher chapter 13 . 3/5/2013
Helena? I did not even guess
| 7letcher chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
ok it is a she so now i am thinking Olivia.
| 7letcher chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
its either Rob or Rebecca. Rob for obvious reasons and Rebecca because from your other story i have noticed that she was really a bitch.
| 7letcher chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
| 7letcher chapter 6 . 3/5/2013
I want to sleep but i cant leave this story.
| 7letcher chapter 5 . 3/5/2013
Oh my, i can actually feel how much they love each other. well done!
| 7letcher chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
I dont get this. who is olli talking to?
| 7letcher chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
oh damn! Someone pushed him? wow
| 7letcher chapter 2 . 3/5/2013
so sorry for christian
| 7letcher chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
man, this story is great! Please, please write more christian and olli stories.
| HELENz chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
Wow. Good fanfic so far! Will you bring them together?
| ollian4life chapter 3 . 6/8/2012
NO! I've read three chapters and I am DEMANDING the fourth. You have me totally involved in this. It's 2 a.m. and I am reading this and couldn't stop and I got to the chapter 3 and read to the end of it and yelled NOOOO! You totally have me enthralled!
I am a Chrolli addict! I love them and their story line.
Once again, I am begging please finish this. I cannot wait to see how you bring it all together. Seriously there was an audiable gasp when I read the last sentence. I just know it's Rob btw I didn't like him, that pushed him off the bridge.
Okay I'll quit begging but seriously finish.
| MEKK chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
Love your story. I hope you have more, I soo want to know what happends when they finely meet again.