Reviews for Shortcomings
JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Lol Ryou-chan's gonna get it for that one XP
Hovinarri chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Mä oon aina automaatiseti ajatellu että 'Kura näkee molemmilla silmillä, mutta on tää aika jännä ajatus... Niin ja toi Ryoun kohteliaisuus oli kiva~
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
That was a great laugh, thanks

btw nice name
sethadmirer chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
(*laughs) Now that was cute. I can imagine them acting that way sometime deeper into their relationship. And Ryou's not taking everything lying down for a change; which is nice. So the fluff is both IC AND win. :D

If possible, I'd love to see more of such ficlets from you. And thank you for sharing this one! CX
earthluva chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Woooooo! Go Ryou! lol I think he was a little OOC but it was good anyway XD
padz-nd-prongz chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Awesome, only word to describe it, not shitty at all,

hoping it is not just a oneshot but if it is it was a pretty damn good one.