Reviews for BD Screenplay Challenge
Mark Sinacori chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
This isn't in perfect screenplay format, but I also am having a hard time uploading mine to here as well. I wanted to ask, how did you upload this?

Mine, I write the entire story on .fdr, and even if I coverted it to .pdf and added it here, it would align the script to the left and indent it. So, I'm unable to even covert .fdr to .pdf on my computer at this time, and I copy and paste the script to word and it goes left aligned without spacing, so I have to space everything out. After I do that, everything has an indent. Scene heading (indent), setting, (indent), cap lock on character (indent) dialogue (indent) action (indent) and it just flows like that throughout.

My guess is, this is because this site doesn't want screenplays and if we add any, they won't be in true screenplay format, any way we uploaded them...right?
abbyweyr chapter 3 . 4/10/2013
Also nicely done.
abbyweyr chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
Nice ending montage for passage of time.
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Nicely done.
CullenObsession114 chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
loved them both!
kjm92 chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I love it!
FelicityT chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
In the sentance "We'll give you a chance tp appreciate it, alone." You put tp instead of to. But a fantastic story like all your others. And yes I am working my way through all your K-T stories. They are all fantastic. Although I did end up reading most of them last night after my internet cut off so I just reviewed all of them today when I was making sure I had read all your fantastic stories. From a VERY apprecitive reader. FelicityT

PS as you could maybe see from my favourite stories list. I have read ALOT of FanFiction (around 50 stories at around 166,000 words 50 1 shots 50 stories between 10,000-100,000 words) but you are the only author that I have favourited more than 4 of their stories and even though at the moment I only add authors to author favourites when I like 2 or more of there stories or an exceptional long one you are in the next class. Thanks again. FelicityT
CullenObsession114 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
loved loved it!
hnwhitlock2000 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
You did good!