|Reviews for subs|
| Rai-Kaze1 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
What the hell is "clesha", if you don't mind my asking? Do you happen to mean "cliché"? Have you ever heard of grammar and punctuation? I'm sure this would be a decent story if I could actually understand what you were saying. There is this little invention called the comma. You should try it sometime. Many of your sentences are run-on and I honestly don't know how you've made it this far in life.
| TheatreGeek98 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I'm pretty sure this a troll, keep up the bad work.
| ih8h8rs chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
duuude tis isn't even a fanfiction i should report you! but i won't, i guess...
| fish chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
there is an eggplant right behind you
| a flamer chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Uhhh...sooooooo, you really really need to just totally rewrite it cuz I could not read a word of that.
| CyanideMangoOfMassDestruction chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
You diefinitly need to fix spelling and grammar and stuff. But keep updating!
| butterfinger chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Good start. Is there more than two chapters? Before letting a teacher see it, check your spelling. I enjoyed it and admire your imagination. Keep up the good work.