Reviews for Other Halves
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
This was beautiful...and kinky, I loved it!
Mortalremember chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
Ever heard of people have two side its them who choose what they want to be, well may be not. That dark side of ruto(naruto's nickname i made) wanted revenge which is absolutely useless (destroying every thing he built) ruto is the oposite of vengence he is forgiving now that s said and created your fic was awesome from the start to how well . . . scary the d-side was and sasuke were oh goodness so amusing, thanks so so so much for this fricking-fucking-fic !
TornUpBird chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
Wow i was actually suspecting The replica of Naruto would win him over. But meh its alright,
jarisalive chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
I was about to hit the fav story button and leave but, well I don't want to die. So great story mate! I wish I could give you a hug, but I don't see the hug box anywhere...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
That last line made me shiver. It's quite scary, hohonestly.
Livy.Uzumaki.Obsessed chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Oh...my...god. That was pure genius, fear, raw emotion, the sex? I loved it, this was great.
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
interesting but messed up.
ayabirkin chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
romantic, but very dark. i like it! :)
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
I greatly enjoyed this, but the ending really got to me. I absolutely love how Sasuke's bad side made a quasi-appearance, and Naruto's bad side still got in the last word.
anonymous chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
goood ... very good ... :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Your stories are very good, and the yaoi-scenes are so hot! The discriptions are delicious' What would really spice it all up is a rimming-scene. Though some may find it disgusting it's an extremely pleasureable activity and I'd truly like to read one written by you! So hoping for some fresh pwp's wish you lots of inspiration!
Taintedbutterfly88 chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
That was an absolutely fascinating and very well written story. I honestly don't think I've ever read anything like your story, quite intriguing and made me think. I loved the part where you said "I want to make love with him not to him" I had never thought about it like that. So just want to say I loved it. :)
Rei Uta chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
This is dark...

Well, not the whole 'who-the-hell-turned-off-the-lights' thing, but more of a 'night' thing. Their darker sides are scary, but Sasuke's I can easily picture, Naruto, not really. And I absolutely hate the evil side. :(
Beejizo chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I just love this story. Wait. I already said that today xD... for about 50 times xD... about your other stories xD

Yeah.

I just love you 8D

(not in THAT way though xD)

I really like the ideas in this story, I mean the idea you came up with for this story... AARGH, I can't even express myself properly at 3 am T..T'

What I mean to say is that this idea for this plot and such is very original and I like it!

The last sentences are a little... idk... beautiful but sad. :c

meep.

I'm really weird.

Probably the lack of sleep..

(did I mention it's 3.18 in the morning here?)

(and that I'm sick?)

(...and probably crazy for reading your fanfiction way after midnight with a only-recently-cooling-fever, while coughing my lungs onto my keyboard? (sorry, that was probably too much info xD))

Anyways... I love your stories, and I love your beta's notes on them. Really, I wish she'd beta one of my stories one day xD
noname00 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Great ficXD; I simply loved it
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