Reviews for fortitude
Jaxa chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Nice moment to capture. Well done!
One Lucky Unicorn chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Dude, I don't think you're a bad writer at all! You have a really interesting style of writing that I like a lot. It's descriptive and poetic in a way. Frank and Jazira do make a lovely couple, but it never would've worked out between them largely due to her family for one, which makes their relationship really bittersweet and sad. I echo the sentiments of the previous reviewer who said that this story perfectly parallels their characters in the film. Good job.
ASweetDisposition chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Great oneshot! I like how you followed the movie's storyline, but took Frank and Jazira's relationship a little farther. It was impossible for them to be together, but impossible for them not to care for one another. They both showed fortitude, neither caved and did anything stupid or regrettable, and that parallels their characters in the movie so well. I really enjoyed it!