Reviews for Becoming
ArchAngel-Kagome chapter 10 . 5/7
I'm not saying that your story is bad but it's like your writing Bella and Jacob's personalities as Edwards with the way they talk.
thedreamcatchers chapter 17 . 3/4
cool
im to tired to express my love for this story
snow eopard chapter 17 . 8/28/2013
Oh man I ,love this t is really intese
Leppy99 chapter 17 . 8/6/2013
Love .it cant wait for ur next update
Beautiful-Liar13 chapter 17 . 4/8/2013
Wow I like it a lot hope there more soon
Varia chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
I miss this story...
isipare chapter 17 . 7/13/2012
hey, love the story
but I really think you should post it on JBNP, cause it would be considered MA here so potentially deleted ...
whereas JBNP accept every rating :-)
Sophie Jay272 chapter 17 . 12/23/2011
I love this story :) Update soon please! :)
radix chapter 17 . 8/11/2011
wow OMG. REALLY that was amazing. keep going... love it to the 10th degree
MCHS2015 chapter 17 . 4/15/2011
are they going to have sex in wolf form?
Zapphe chapter 17 . 4/6/2011
I like the twist of Bella being a werewolf too. May be you can write a love scene when they both are in their wolf form and become very animalistic and primal. It may turn some people off but I think it would be interesting and different amongst mountains of other stories. Isn't sometimes it's good to shock ?

Anyhow, well done. Love the story so far.
fullmoon422 chapter 17 . 2/25/2011
Really loving this. Its getting interesting. Can't wait to hear more. Their entire "family" is really coming together. Waiting for more lessons from Eleanor in her dreams, and more information about the picture in the book.
fullmoon422 chapter 10 . 2/25/2011
That was funny "please don't talk about vampires"...

I have a few questions - did she have to cut her hair since she turned into a werewolf? And why haven't they phased lately and practiced being wolves? Plus, will she be able to do that when she is pregnant?
fullmoon422 chapter 5 . 2/25/2011
OMG this story is like a dream come true! For Jake and Bella, for two teenagers! wow...
The Moon's Mistress chapter 17 . 2/22/2011
i love this story! cant wait to read more XD
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