|Reviews for Unfinished Business, a Heather story|
| Secyatlaw chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
Very gritty, uncompromising and clear glimpse of what might have been. Well-written. Good job! Hope all is well with you. Jericho lives!
| Aldenata chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Well, that was dark, and appallingly bleak.
By which I mean, realistic and highly enjoyable. My hat is off to you!
I especially liked how she was able to make the fire look like an accident. I doubt I would have ever thought to gremlin the ground wires (not smart if you value your life, probably wouldn't fool modern arson forensics; neither would matter to Heather).
| scifiaddict chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Hey its been a while buts good to know your still writing. This is interesting I always felt Heather had a lot of growing up to do its interesting to see it happen here