Reviews for The fallout
Goldielover chapter 4 . 7/13/2015
This story was so interesting. Its a shame that it seems to have long since been abandoned. I would have loved to have read more. Thank you for what was written, at least.
Laurie143 chapter 4 . 9/3/2014
Pretty please update really I can't wait to see what happens next!
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I would really love to read this story, it sounds really interesting to me, but I can't because of how you have the text situated on the document. Sorry, but I don't read stories like this.
FWILCC chapter 4 . 11/22/2010
OMG! I love this story (a)

Great writhing! :D

Keep on writhing :D 3
Nissa-Cullen chapter 4 . 11/18/2010
I've just read your story and am liking it very much. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Bella obviously won't recognize them or know what they are, but will she accept them again? Will they take care of her now? They'll have to at least protect her from Victoria.
CCisGod chapter 4 . 11/13/2010
Well, well, well... I really liked their escape plan. That was a bit of a lightening to the story. I'm glad that carlisle is with bella now :)

please continue
whitegurl2013 chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
wow...this is intense. carlisle/alice to the rescue! cant wait to read more!
IThinkINeededThat chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
Holy flippin cow!~ girl!

I am so hooked! I would have reviewed the first three chapters, but I was in a rush as I was so hooked!

Lovin it!
Cullens Darlin chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
I really like this story. I am finding it hard to read ...the paragraphs are all broken into 2 lines throughout making it read choppy
Babe Pryor chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
wow, a real snake pit.. with a Nurse Ratchett type doctor with a twist, she's gay..and wants to please Victoria the very vamp that wants Bella to die for James's death..Now Carlisle and Alice show up to rescue Bella, only she's emaciated, down to 80 some odd pounds, but she's still Bella..slightly krispy due to the snake pit she's in, I hope they just take her away..Carlisle's angry at the treatment she's received..what will he do? (need a nuther update!) xx
kouga's older woman chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
They've saved her life but can they fix the rest of her?
Babe Pryor chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
right now, this is hinting at darkness..if something bad happens to Bella at Bellevue, it will be dark then..but it would be nice if Carlisle shows up in the nick of time to rescue her.. Sad that Esme and Carlisle are bickering..Edward, so superior, so noble..meh, so full of shit..I do like this beginning, but I see I only have 1 chap left then no updates for a few months..I hope you get inspired to finish, or, at least to update..xx
CCisGod chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
oooh are you gonna continue?

will Carlisle come to the rescue?

That would be good :)

please continue;

Babe Pryor chapter 3 . 8/6/2010
Are we making Edward a bad guy in this? Selfish? Will he eventually end up with Tanya? Will he confront Carlisle? and Bella? After Bella falls for Carlisle will Edward finally come back trying to reconcile with Bella? Will Esme and Carlisle divorce? Will Esme be angry? Will she be with Edward? I have no idea, but this is least there's no orderly driving a 'pussy wagon', pimping out chicks who are unconscious. (as in 'Kill Bill'..)LOL..I guess it could be worse then, couldn't it? xx
Lexigal1984 chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
awesome story. can't wait til the next chapter.
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