Great story

Absolutely loved every word thank you for sharing your wonderful story. Regards

I can’t believe Bella is falling for that BS

Being friends with one of Edward’s slut is extremely weird

What a nasty and disgusting manwhore

Very beautiful story.
Love it.
Thank you for sharing..

Loved your story even when Bella annoyed me! Thank you for writing it.

Will check out your other stories!

I am one to wait to see what happens, before I comment… but all I can say is that Bella brought this on herself. She was stubborn and in the wrong. Yes Edward’s polars blah blah blah, but your in an adult relationship. You talk not run!

This Bella at the moment is childish. Grow up!

I know it's been 11 years but I hope you're still reading your reviews. My husband just drove down to Washington DC to see Nadal play. We managed to get into the stadium the night before we were planning to see him play. It turns out that we got to see the last few points before he lost the match. If we had waited until the next day we would have missed it! Long story even longer, this has been extra fun for me to read because in the whole process of going to see the Citi-open, I learned a lot about Tennis (My husband is a huge fan and fan boys over Nadal). I think I got so much more out of your story having my new appreciation for the game!

Fabulous story, Thank you!

Hmmm, I thought she would actually be a witch. :-) Nice little read. :-)

Cant stand pathetic idiots like this. He went from shoving his tongue down some skanks mouth to shoving it down hers. Ewwwwww. She needs to hand her woman card in.

There’s a lot lot I like about this story and I did enjoy it, but I just don’t understand how there’s the awful scene where Bella is attacked and almost raped and it’s never mentioned again. James was arrested, so surely there must have been a trial of some kind? I just can’t accept that she was devastated by the fact that she thought Edward cheated, but has no reaction to being horribly attacked and very nearly raped. It just really downplays a very serious event in the story. Something like that needs to be pivotal to the story, or it just shouldn’t be included

Honestly this is a good story but I absolutely hate it she gets let off the hook with another dude. And for not trusting him.

I get he loves her but plenty of stories have similar situations in reverse where Edward has to earn his spot back.. but Bella just had to endure a child like tantrum and within a week, they are good.

I quit.. if Edward has gotten with another girl, it would be a big deal.

So he's not ok with her not trusting him but he's ok with getting with another dude? THAT'S backwards as fuck.

Reverse the situation and Edward is a cunt for kissing)dating another person. She is one imo.