Reviews for Unexpected and Unwanted Gifts
Guest chapter 4 . 8/24
this is great cookies are easy just don't read or write while makeing them
i've made that mistake before (said in fun i know the cookies aren't real)
Storm chapter 20 . 7/18/2013
I love the story! I know its been a while since you posted it, but I thought I'd tell you. But just one little thing, I didn't catch it at first, but then I happened to be thinking about it...if Slave is 13, and Shadow is her daughter, and 5...Slave would have been 8 when she conceived? O.o Sorry, that just bugged me and I thought if tell you. Other than that its a great story, I love it!
power214063 chapter 22 . 8/2/2011
can you pleasre write a sequel about how they adjust to freedom and maybe what people do to keep them slaves?
dudeseyaj chapter 22 . 7/15/2011
OMG! This story was amazing! I loved it so much!

And for a sequel... well... there is so much you could do!

You could do them going to school for the first time - that would be funny - and the kids hanging with Tony and the rest of the team (you could even add a little Tiva if you know what I mean *wink wink*) and then there could be birthdays, if they know them.

The amount of birthday presents they could get would be phenominal (I hope I spelt that right...)!

There could be more Christmases...

And then you could do them when they become teenagers... and then there could be house parties (Scipo would probably throw the best house parties) and then problems at school (Scipo getting detentions, ect...) and even homework issues (McGee could help with that)

Of course, you don't have to use those ideas. They're just suggestions.

Again, loved the ending!

dudeseyaj xxx
JustGoingWithTheWind chapter 22 . 6/23/2011
Amazing! I'm so sad it's over, but it's a great story!

I love Scipo the most, though Rupert's right after that. Shadow I like as well, but not as much. She's too... Little maybe. I'm not a fan of little children. But she does make me smile a lot.

~Alyks.
DS2010 chapter 22 . 6/22/2011
Liked that Gibbs adopted them, he really didn't like owning slaves. Well done
GingerNinja1111 chapter 22 . 6/22/2011
I absolutely loved this story, and I am sad to see that it's over, but I really enjoyed reading it. I don't have any ideas for a sequel, except to maybe have it be during the adoption process, or right afterwards.
missyAn chapter 22 . 6/22/2011
Thank you so much,I really,really enjoyed it and would love to see a sequel.
IMSLES chapter 22 . 6/22/2011
I'm so happy to see a happy ending for this story and that Gibbs found a way to make them his children and free them from their 'position' in life!

Thanks for an intriguing story!

~~Sue
cheether chapter 22 . 6/22/2011
They have a lot of child hood to catch up on such as camping, tree forts, fishing and such. Since I have read other stoies also I don't remember anything about their schooling I would think that they would a tutor so how are they doing in that aspect?
MissFee chapter 22 . 6/22/2011
Hallo Ana!

This has been such a pleasure to read; just a lovely story! I've enjoyed seeing the updates in my inbox, and the kids are just gorgeous. Perhaps a oneshot once the Bossman finalises the adoption? :D

Keep up the good work doll!

Love fee xo
Guest chapter 21 . 5/18/2011
Finally finished it! I noticed that the boys Scipo and Rupert are kind of like Dizznozo and Mcgee, the black haired Mischievous one is like Tony and the redheaded nervous one is like Mcgee. I also thought Shadow acted way too mature for a 5 year old.
GingerNinja1111 chapter 21 . 4/29/2011
"It's for a holiday called Christmas. Do you know about God?" When the little raven haired girl nodded, Gibbs continued. "He had a son named Jesus Christ, who was killed, and then came back to life. Christmas is to celebrate him coming back to life. Although now it's an excuse to get presents."

It's actually Easter that is celebrating Jesus's resurrection, it's Christmas that celebrates his birth.

Aw! Scipo and Rupert are sooo cute! Aww!
Ellieandra chapter 21 . 4/20/2011
this was lovely!

maybe in the sequel you can free the slaves and have gibbs adopt them or something.

oh, btw, christmas celebrates jesus' birth. good friday his death and easter sunday celebrates his resurrection from the dead, or rebirth, if you will, thats why at easter you get eggs; they symbolise new life.
IMSLES chapter 21 . 4/19/2011
I was so happy to see an update. Thanks!

One thing Christmas is a celebration of Jesus' birth (Easter is about his coming back from the dead).

Hope they all have a great Christmas morning. I can't wait to read how Shadow enjoys it!

~~Sue
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