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Xtraitor chapter 3 . 5/15/2013
feel your pain Ed. German isn't an easy language to learn. Had my speaking test today. Was freaking out when studying. I didn't know which questions my teacher would ask.
I can get the words perfectly fine, its sentence structure that I have problems with.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
Ha! Love this! Awesome work! *U* Gets cuter and cuter, and I love the curses and such that let me know it really is Ed (if you know what I mean)! *U*
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
COOL! Aw, and so sweet, Alfons giving Ed all his bacon and keeping his 'secret!' Plus, poor Ed feeling guilty about not wanting to talk to the kid who looked really close to Al! *U* LOVE this so much! Absolutely wonderful work! *U* Rock on! *U*
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
AW! I really like that! Awesome work! Totally amazing job! :D Gosh, you wrote this so well! It was like it was actually how everything went down when they first started talking! *U* LOVE it! Rock on! The Al vs. Alfons part, though...SO SAD! T_T
AnonymousClutz chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
This is so fun to read :) I hope it will get updated though, I really want to read more ;o;
Bob'sCookie yet again chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
Ok, I really love this story and I wish there was more! You mentioned there would be about ten chapters, but there's only three, and this hasn't been updated in a long while... TTTT

I hope you continue with this story, because I would like to read more! I love your writing style and imagination! It tickles me. :D

Hey, you're Lalikaa from DevaintArt, right? You're that huge AlMei fan? I'm surprized you haven't made up a Chinese girlfriend for Alfons. xD

I have this idea that before he met Edward, he was in China (for some reason/trip with Dr. Oberth/rocket study/something) and anyways, while he was over there he met a certain princess (whom he doesn't know is a princess) named Mei Ling and her (normal sized) panda, Xiao.

I really wish I had my story written out, but I'm not very good at writing. TT My hope is that I shall inflict a torrent of plot bunnies upon the world so as to give someone else the inspiration to write it. xD (wow, am I just really lazy or what?)

HeiMei! It wouldv'e been awesome, right? (laughs)

Ok, I'm getting off topic... Like I said, I have really enjoyed this story thus far and I wish it would continue. I love the mention of Alpone (Elric) in the library; Ed's annecdote of Alphonse not fitting in the door so he had to Alchemize it. And I love how Ed just allows Alfons to assume he's American.

I'll keep my eyes out for an update on this story! \0/ "Yaye!"
Bob'sCookie again chapter 2 . 2/17/2012
"He briefly wondered if Ed liked eggs and bacon, but then came to the conclusion that of course he did because, well, who doesn't like eggs and bacon?" -I love the logic. xD

One thing: if Edward is sixteen then Alfons would be fifteen since he is one year younger. ... Um, not really important, I guess. '

But OMGrapefroot! That whole last little section in Ed's POV. was just too frickin' hilarious! (dies of laughter)

The England-Canada-America part was one of the greatest things I've ever read! xD
Bob'sCookie is2lazy2sign in chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
"I enjoy rockets. You know… the machines your dad helps with. I also enjoy cats and apple pie." -at this, I squeeled like a fangirl! I am so ashamed of myself, but I couldn't help it! xD That just shows how good this story is! :D Very cute, very funny, with a mild dose of sadness... Rockets, kitties, and apple pie!-though in my mind, Alfons had an obsession with dogs, that equaled Alphonse's obsession with cats. Because, you know, Alfons and Alphonse are the same-but not. xD

I really love this idea; Edward and Alfons not being able to fully communicate. Though I kinda wish the German dialect was written in German (with a translation to the side or at the bottom) but that's just me. I still love this! And it's not confusing at all how you differentciate between the Als.
Beckett Simpleton chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Tis is pretty muc one of te best i al and ed ideas ive seen! could You please update! Please?
SilenceBeckoning chapter 3 . 7/7/2011
And there is Ed's determination! Loved the story! The movie hardly touch on the meeting of these two, which, to me, was a great disappointment, I had wanted to know what Ed's reaction would be, what Alfons' reaction to Ed's reaction ect.. I had assumed that German was Amestrian, but it's interesting to explore the possibility that Amestrian is English and that Ed would have to LEARN German. Can't wait to read more!
KanaPetrsr323 chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
what will happen next? Will you continue this? I am enjoying this plot, try to update soon.
Qrowbars chapter 2 . 5/26/2011
XD

What the fuck was Canada... Read it 3 times.
m chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
this is really cool! update asap please!

ShadowTraveller123
Skylan chapter 3 . 12/27/2010
Update sooooon!
Laora chapter 3 . 12/18/2010
Dear God, I think I love you.

Like, seriously. This is categorized as "angst"...if this is angst, I think your humor would just about kill me. I laughed my way through this! They're just so adorable! And I usually don't like animeverse stories...I think Alfons is the only exception to that :D

"Wait, what? What the fuck was Canada?"

Just about made my day XD Thank you so much for writing! I really hope you continue.
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