Reviews for Our Lives Unbound
Cesium Spring chapter 36 . 1/15/2023
Thank you for your beautiful story ! I liked this fic very much even though the sex was NOT my cup of tea, this is just how talented you are ! (I read your fic dispite the warnings because i'm really curious, ethnologist at heart and i do not regret it at all)
I loved the plot : Edward's stuttering, his loneliness at the beginning, and the beautiful trusting relationship with Bella, the psycho-father, and... well all of the characters were really well written and i just wanted to take Edward and Bella in my arms and give them a big Hug.
Cherry on top : i finally understand the song from Hozier, Take me to Church (that i love so much) ! Do you know this one ? I was always wondering "what the fuck is he talking about ?" I knew there was something i didn't get. Well now i get it crystal clear, it's like the song is the original soundtrack of your fic. Thank you for the enlightening (enlightment ? I'm not an english speaker, sorry for any mistakes).
And thank you for sharing your talent !
benjigogo chapter 36 . 1/11/2023
beautiful when. i loved this story. the characters were absolutely captivating
hangala98 chapter 5 . 2/18/2022
Just have to say that your writing is beautiful. I’m captivated, and not even just by the lemony scenes. Wow.
Justewpattz1 chapter 22 . 5/31/2021
Eu nunca li algo tão intenso e bem escrito como isso!
Guest chapter 8 . 10/27/2020
Love. It.
MasterMike000 chapter 36 . 10/13/2020
To this day, I comeback and re-read this story over and over and over again because I consider this to be one of the best BDSM and Female Domination stories ever written...and it's a fanfiction, which is embarrassing for authors who release their garbage attempt with creating a BDSM stories (looking at you E. L. James). While the story isn't something really great, deep or extraordinary, the two main characters, Edward and Bella, is what makes this story absolutely fantastic. Their chemistry together is absolutely amazing and beautiful, that puts the original Edward and Bella from Twilight to shame. Both characters are interesting in their own way, like how Edward in this version stutters and is easily afraid and shy of many things that occurred in his life, while Bella is a very understanding and sweet character that truly cares for Edward to be well, even though she is a domme. And the author PERFECTLY makes these two characters work together and have a great relationship. BDSM is also handled right in this story. Bella introduces BDSM to Edward in a perfect manner (unlike Christian Grey stupid way where he is forcing Anna to be his submissive if she wants to be with him). Bella in this story, dominates a bit to Edward at first but knows her limits and knows not to go too far, because she cares for him. And slowly, Edward himself starts to enjoy it and realizes that he enjoys being dominated by Bella (again, not because he is being forced to). This makes the BDSM in the story become more heavy as the story progress, and it's well handled because of how Edward and Bella's relationship develop at the same time. Another thing is that it's also tries to handle and discuss realistic topics that can happen when you are into BDSM. Like how your friends or family can react to it and some of them not being open to it, which I like. It doesn't try something stupid by having your ex-boss stalk you and kidnap someone. It is a more realistic depiction on what can happen when you are into BDSM. So you have great characters with a perfect chemistry together, that handles the BDSM aspect of the story PERFECTLY and is hot to read at the same time...And you get a fantastic story. I always hope to find a good Female Domination story that are actually published, but sadly, most of them are just smut garbage with sex happening in like every second without proper pacing with the story and the characters. BUT THIS...this is how you write a GOOD Female Domination and BDSM story.
Squkymun chapter 36 . 5/21/2020
I came across this story from a recommendation on Facebook. I am sooo glad I read it! This is one of the best Dom/sub stories I have read. I love that Edward was the sub and Bella was the Dom. There are not many of these arrangements out there. Thanks for sharing!
saintfudge chapter 36 . 10/17/2018
Us hat a great read ..I have had this in my favs / to be read list since 2012 and have finally read it ... What a great story thanks for sharing .. Have fun ..
twilightobession chapter 36 . 6/25/2018
Love love love this story. Thank you for sharing it with us. I have really enjoyed reading it.
twilightobession chapter 35 . 6/25/2018
Glad things seem to be working out for everybody.
twilightobession chapter 34 . 6/25/2018
I hope Alice gets better. She sounds like a spoiled brat. Maybe Jasper needs to spank her. Lol.
twilightobession chapter 33 . 6/25/2018
So glad Edward enjoyed the party. Glad he did not freeze up while being watched.
twilightobession chapter 32 . 6/25/2018
I'm glad Edward called his mom. Can't wait to read about them going to the party.
twilightobession chapter 31 . 6/25/2018
Love that he finally stood up to his father.
twilightobession chapter 30 . 6/25/2018
Edward is getting stronger and stronger.
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