Reviews for Our Lives Unbound
blueeyes11354 chapter 19 . 5/6/2012
Alice doesn't understand that while she wants Bella to be herself with the guy she is with, she can be herself with Edward. Sad that Alice has to paint all the guys Bella dates with the same brush. And Bella is talking to Alice at the end there, right? Moment of panic there...
blueeyes11354 chapter 18 . 5/6/2012
That is exactly the right way to approach his issues with that position. And they are getting closer and closer to those I love yous! :)
blueeyes11354 chapter 17 . 5/6/2012
A redo. Nice. :)
blueeyes11354 chapter 16 . 5/6/2012
He wants to trust, but he's scared. Bella is holding back as well in not sharing her past. They are so similar, and they don't even know it yet. Both were with partners who didn't fully understand them, and it didn't end well. I'm hoping they just need some time to work it out. :)
blueeyes11354 chapter 15 . 5/6/2012
Like Jasper, but am concerned about Alice. And nice use of a gag. :)
blueeyes11354 chapter 14 . 5/6/2012
You had me worried there for a minute. But that conversation really needed to happen, and thus the catalyst is provided. :)
blueeyes11354 chapter 13 . 5/6/2012
They are so sweet as they tentatively learn each other. Though perhaps tentatively isn't the right word, but I think it fits. ;)
blueeyes11354 chapter 12 . 5/6/2012
You'd think that people working in sex stores would be the least judgmental people ever. lol But I guess there are still those few select assholes out there.
blueeyes11354 chapter 11 . 5/6/2012
The give and take between them provides for a fascinating dynamic.
blueeyes11354 chapter 10 . 5/6/2012
i like her in his space, and even better, so does he.
blueeyes11354 chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
One thing I really enjoy reading in these types of stories is the conversations that occur outside of sex, but still about it. I don't see how this type of relationship could work without open, honest discussion. Plus I think it increases the depth of their relationship to talk about it.
blueeyes11354 chapter 8 . 5/6/2012
Powerful. I got a little teary-eyed there when he thanks her. :)
blueeyes11354 chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
It can be very risky, yet rewarding to put your desires out there like that.
blueeyes11354 chapter 6 . 5/6/2012
Nice play on words. ;) Her acceptance of his vulnerability is so sweet.
blueeyes11354 chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
Acceptance of who you are is a beautiful thing. :)
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