Reviews for Totally Sweet
PrussianEngel chapter 15 . 12/29/2014
Oh god the suspense! Please update soon. But I think you should make the chapters a bit more descriptive and pace yourself. Also to help yourself come up with ideas you could jot how you want the fic to end and work your way through to how you want it.
viewer chapter 15 . 3/7/2013
Guest chapter 8 . 2/17/2013
Yay, im so happy for Nunna
SunshineProject chapter 15 . 1/7/2013
i really wanted more...
feamlenaruto chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
this is a nice to read
realityfling18 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
SpandexShorts chapter 2 . 12/7/2010

The ending happend a little too fast (in my opinion)
Skiperella chapter 14 . 10/14/2010
Loved this chapter Like I how I love all of yours! :) cant wait to see what happens next.
Skiperella chapter 13 . 8/25/2010
haha! Yay, some smut~ I love it :))

~ Cant wait to read more!
Blood'Red-Envy'Rei chapter 13 . 8/24/2010
Update more please! I'm excited to see what happens! :]] love love love it!
Skiperella chapter 12 . 8/22/2010
Suzaku, It's a mother-daughter bond : You wouldnt know ;DD


hehe ~ I love this story so much!

Hope we got a hot, smutty lemon in italy!

HellX chapter 12 . 8/22/2010
but i don't know the answer for the challenge. good story by the way.
Blood'Red-Envy'Rei chapter 12 . 8/22/2010
Oh meh gosh! You have to update soon! Please oh please! I love this story! Its amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Skiperella chapter 11 . 8/12/2010
love the wedding~ I was kinda expecting Lulu to be in a brides outfit but this played out well still :)

Cant wait for the honeymoon *w*
Skiperella chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
ohhh- its not to bad with twins now :DD (good thing its a girl...if it was another guy i would of been like INCEST :3 and thy were paired for eahc other) lol..

lovely story stilL~

keep it up.
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