Reviews for Watching
Bbtsy chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Needs pictures
SMU chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
that was similar to my first time lol
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I liked it
bitch chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Idk... Please don't act so fang-sucks ish
larissa.stapleton chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Duck yeah
MidnightLyoness chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Ummmmmm... Uhhhhhhh...welllll... WTF?
Reviewer chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
They just had sex and they only LIKE each other?
Hazel Nut 123 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
hmmm,it was good. I cant decid if you should continue... i vote no, its good just the way it is
max and me in a tree chapter 1 . 7/13/2011


In an awesome, perverted sort of way!
Reverie Wilde chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I disagree with those that said it was creepy. What girl wouldn't stay and watch? I liked it a lot. I especially liked the word you used for his moan. "Nnnghh"
WeDidItForTheDead chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Haha. That was really good. I can never get my stories to not sound like a fifth grader just trying to pass this class. I wouldn't call it cute, but it's good. Now we know why Fang was always the last to fall asleep...
LapsusAngelus chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Ummm. This is really, really awkward, and not cute at all... sorry.
ooops haha chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
just one thing :) the pairing is called fax not mang haha. thats all :D kthanks
the7thflockmember chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I like how you made it a very short sex. Obviously, your first time isn't going to be this long event, and you're the only author who has ever really made that clear. I virtually applaud you (;

azhgirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Well done! sweet, hot, realistic and really well written :) I will check out your other fics.
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