|Reviews for Coming Out|
| OakeX chapter 1 . 1/3
Nice, nice job. Funny, light-hearted, with just a touch of seriousness in it to keep things interesting. Actually a very nice change to your other, more emotional, heavy stories. Nicely done though, you appear to have the rare gift of being good at deep stories, and light-hearted stories.
| ruilin.chen.54 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
Wow. Artemis was almost acting exactly like Orion... o_O
| missylynn99 chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
Awww, that's adorable! :)
| WriterGuy1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHH AH...oh that was rich, that was...who was talking anyways? was it Artemis or Orion?
| Socially Awkward Bunny chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
| That Crazy Hippie Gurl chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Ha ha ha...awkward. Pero me gusta este, por que es comico. Yes, I just spoke Spanish.
| LiveLaughLoveReadForever chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I LOVE THIS! *subscribes* More please!
| HeadlessHoncho chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
The XI commandment: Thou shalt not try to put H/T together.
Kit, you're a sinner... a bad bad women. Back away from me Heathen! Not that I don't still love her, but she can be like an evil H/T vampire sometimes.
| Indochine chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Lool! Artemis' reaction to Trouble's words is wonderful!
| silverphoenix chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Wouldn't it be great if there was a scene like this in TAC? LOL. Hilarious, great job. :)
| O.O chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
O.O um... aquward. KEEP WRITING! 0.0
| The Creatress chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Hehe, funny... One minor thing: I think you got centimeters and millimeters mixed up.
Also... Nevermind what Kit says! If it doesn't have blatant sex in it, she'll insert background sex in it herself...
| Kitsune Heart chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Oh, most excellent! It makes sense that Artemis would make a comparative study about this. Poor bot, he has so manny issues, he gives Time Magazine a run for it's money.
Five-word writing is pretty hard, actually. I think you did a much better job than me. I had far more extra words.
| Holly Marie Fowl chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
ROFL. That was cute. :) And I agree with you: H/T is just not happening. At this point, I honestly feel bad for Holly. Two guys she's friends with both say they love her. haha.
| TheQuixoticKid86 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
...I hate to admit it but I don't get all of it. That said, I still think this is really good. I like the diction, and the description embedded in your work. This is cute.