Reviews for Angel
anime-obsessed95 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
It was really cute, but I'd say work on your grammar and structure a bit and it'll improve greatly!:D
XxXUchiha SurayaXxX chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
AAAAEWWWWWWwwww
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
That was cute and I liked it a lot, but you need to work on your grammar and it is hard to read so space it out a little more. I don't mean to sound mean but I only want to help.