Reviews for Happiness
SpiritoftheWhiteRose chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Really well written! Very creative and I abosulutely loved the ending!
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Very nice! I like the way you've identified the roiling mass of emotions that both of them have been trying to keep under wraps.

My favorite element of this fic, however is your use of repetition, which builds throughout the piece, giving it a sense of intensity and completion.

Thanks for sharing!
Resounding chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I liked how you did this. Very good! :)
Snoozy-Dwarf chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
wow, that was amazing. I love insights into their reasoning, especially about this split!
Myname chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
you have great insight into the characters. hopefully the powers that run the show have the same insights.
stephaniew chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Really nicely done! I really liked the structure of this! Very insightful as well. Excellent language and metaphor! Thanks for posting!