Reviews for Waiting II
Alytiger chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Oh wait, um what... So they were both dead? But I... He talked to Raven... Why can Raven talk to ghosts? Since when could she do that? I... I liked it... But I had to read it twice to get everything.
jhamerter chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
This was wonderfu,l and I would be lying if I said I didn't cry on multiple accounts very well written! Thank you!
harold-the-rabbit chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
I am dead inside. I curse you and thank you. This story is amazing.
MissKonoha chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
Oh how you tricked us! Oh my, this is so bloody good! I bawled my eyes out when I figured it out!
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 8/28/2014




Give me a moment, please.


Okay, more than a moment. So sue me.


Huh. Okay.
Breathing normal again? ... Check.
Eyesight un-starred again? ... Check. Sort of.
(another Kleenex ...)


*sigh* You just keep getting better, don't you?
My heart feels just a bit too large for my chest now. So much crashing together, so much revealed in just a few short sentences. I was KIND OF confused a little bit when he left the service. I didn't see him doing that. Now I understand.

Dear Lord In Heaven, the sheer INTENSITY. How do you pack that concentration of emotion into ... there's just so much to ... it's so clear and so beautiful and so ...

Yeah, okay, so you've reduced me to a mumbling moron. Congrats or something.

YES, it goes in Favorites. You had to ask? Damn.

I'm going to be useless the rest of the afternoon. REALLY shouldn't read your stuff on lunch break. But I couldn't help myself.
furrballnerd chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
louisemiko chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
What a fantastic story, was not expecting that at all. You are an amazing angst writer, I literally can't stop crying.
j.schofield chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
God that was sad reading, but once I got to the end I was so relieved that they were still able to be together. Still very sad but I guess they lived a full life.
Diana Campos21500 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I love it but it leaves me wondering how starfire died
Electricboa chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
This was actually rather sad. I've never gotten into the comics, so I imagine I missed any and all references there, but there were a lot of things I liked in this. Raven and Beast Boy I like, something about them just works. I'm not sure I completely figured out the ending, though, is she a ghost?
jessmonster chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Oh God, that scared the crap outta me. I was so sad. He died first?! And then she died?! And then Raven cried?! Oh, stop.
Liriell chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
You know, after having read the prequel of to the story, I had assumed that it was some sweet companion piece, explaining the those missing moment from his point of view, but damn, I guess I never expected that. It is hardly surprising, considering that usually after that 'whole drama' from before that the sequel is just a further story to add their happy ending.

It almost seem cruel of you to make them go through this whole ordeal, you know. I usually, well it is not hate, but I always think that it is a shame that they need so much time to get together, all those wasted time. It does make me wonder why exactly you added this, as most people would not; rather they crave for a sweet happy ending. Well it is not like I do not like the way you did this. Partly, I find it quite entertaining, especially the way you have woven the DC storyline into this and frankly, after reading the whole ordeal, learning that no matter what happens and that apparently, no matter what happens, they would still end up together, it does give me some hope for the DC comics. Hope, that maybe there is still a chance for them to end up together, even though they have already gone through so much and even though it seems as if they cannot go back anymore.

So, thanks for the ... interesting side of the story.
epicwisdom chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
How can you possibly say that you "un-angsted" this story?

Beautiful one-shot.
Fonogenico chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
OH MY GOODNESS .. i didn't see that coming ..

HE was already dead before HER ? shucks , this poignant story is so .. T_T
this is making my heart ache so much that I need to breath first before writing heeereee .. T_T

ahmm , if you'll excuse me, i'll be going now .. i might cry again, harder.
if I remember them again ..
but really , you are a very wonderful angst-writer . kudos to you ms. Kryalla :')

- a guest from fb , a happy 2013 year to you ..
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