|Reviews for Summer Lessons|
| Leo's Lair chapter 11 . 2/14
Excellently written, great story and decent plot speed. Well done. Cheers.
| Alexis Rinaldi chapter 11 . 9/27/2013
I just found this story and thoroughly enjoyed it! It was a nice change from my usual and I added it to my C2 as a well-written fanfic. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and talents!
| Dubhe Epsilon chapter 11 . 9/4/2013
I'm not quite sure if I liked this. It seems to have very little in terms of a plot-very few obstacles are presented, and those that are are instantly overcome. I also don't really like your portrayal of Hermione, as a bossy, jealous, egotistical friend who is constantly trying to force Harry to spend time with her. I can see many of these traits in her-Hermione can be bossy and pushy about studying and the like-but I also see a kind and loyal friend that Harry wants around and others find interesting because of her intelligence and passion for what she believes in. But I won't go too deep into that-this is your story.
On the other hand, it was entertaining and, despite including many cliches, original. The grammar was excellent, and that always makes for a pleasant read.
If you were going to change this or edit it at all, I would advise you tone down the paragraphs where you discuss nothing but how much Harry's changed and how great he is now. I would also have you tweak Hermione's portrayal slightly-maybe eliminating a few of the more extreme adjectives-and bring her closer to the girl who was one of Harry's best friends. I'm not saying you should portray her positively, I'm just asking for a more fair assessment of her strengths and weaknesses. For instance, she stands up for what she believes in and fights for what is fair. You could develop a subplot from her distaste with the misogynist wizarding culture. She could protest or try to change it. Anyway, these are just suggestions. Do what you like with them.
| old-crow chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
This was a very nice story with an original storyline. You obviously thought it through and developed your story quite well.
For some reason, it felt like you intended to take quite a poke at Hermione at every opportunity, with very little real reason to do so. That's an easy trap for a storyteller to fall in to.
Thank upu for takeing the time to envision, develop and polish your story.
| reader chapter 11 . 7/2/2013
Are you serious that how you end it, I am totally disappointed.
| MuggleCreator chapter 11 . 6/15/2013
Awesome stuff. I'll be looking at the sequel.
It all makes a lot of sense! Pity the war interrupted so much in the other timeline...
| Engrprince chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
Great premise. I have enjoyed your story so far. It is well written
| flame55 chapter 11 . 5/22/2013
this is great
| firebolthallow1572 chapter 11 . 5/15/2013
I loved story about being with Tonks and how they help Harry chance and being much Happier than before. Are you going do a sequel?
| Steve-Arkarian chapter 11 . 5/10/2013
I LOVED this story! It was wonderful!
| Danterevan chapter 11 . 4/19/2013
great loving this setup as andi is choice as a mother
| Araytigre chapter 11 . 4/9/2013
This was a lot of fun, and surprisingly, fairly quick paced, yet not boring or jumbled in any way. I thoroughly enjoyed how you had Harry deal with Hermione at the Ministry cafeteria, when she learned about his tutoring classes (that She would not be able to attend, and why), and surprising everyone at the table (except Hermione) at the same time. The fact that Harry was able to not only complete this summers, but next summers lessons and passing everything with "O's" really ruffled Hermione's feathers no end. I really liked Sirius's Will (although I could have sworn that (at least in canon) that his middle name was "Orion", granted that this was "AU", but you can see where I am coming from (not that it really matters). Finally Harry is out of the Dursley household, 'nuff said there. Now to the next story. Thank You. TTFN
| serenitydragonGX chapter 11 . 3/13/2013
I think there could have been more to the story, but overall it was interesting to read. You did well with the initial characterisation but I thought Harry's attraction to ginny was rushed and you underscored Hermione's OWL grades.
| ptl4ever419 chapter 11 . 2/24/2013
Aww I love it I really hope there's a sequel can wait to find out :)
| hypercell chapter 11 . 2/13/2013
I hope you write a sequel to this, it's great!