Reviews for Revenge is a dish best served early
C0ldSteel chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
John's not the only one who'd like to see what she does. You could do with a little editing-put people's actions in the same paragraphs with their dialog, and make a new paragraph when a different person does or says something. That would make it a lot easier to read. Thanks for a fun story!
Raven Aorla chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
OMFG. This is impossibly yummy. Thank you for telling me about this!