|Reviews for I Walk a Little Faster|
| xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
Loved this! :D
| zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
| Sepsis chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
I really liked it. :)
| Plastic Roses chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Love this~ :)
| Tchabita A chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
I vaguely think I've read this story before... But now that I'm reading again, I am REALLY unsure... xD
Drugs And Dominos?
What can you say about the song that inspired this story of yours? :D :)
Eve wears heels? I didn't know that. I thought that she was more of a... CONSERVATIVE type... The kind of girl that DOESN'T WEAR HEELS... xD :P
I don't get what happened in the LONG fourth paragraph of your story at all! :( Especially this part:
'She tried to keep her face calm but she was sure that he eyes expressed some sort of silent desperation.'
Is that supposed to be "her" instead of "he" ?
Eve is scared of Luck? Really? ...
In the narration 'His right hand reached over and grabbed hold her arm.' , shouldn't the word "of" be there? In the middle of the words "hold" and "her" respectively?
LOL! I LOVE YOU EVE! I curse society's choice of feminine footwear! :D :) :)) xD
I've always known Eve and Luck would make a VERY CUTE couple... :D :)
LOL! I LOVE YOU LUCK GANDOR! xD
LOL! Luck and Eve! xD
LUCK BLUSHED! OMG! I CAN SO IMAGINE IT! AND HE LOOKS JUST SO EFFIN' CUTE WITH THAT BLUSH! OMG! :D :) xD .
In the narration 'Luck gave a small push off the light post and right himself with no problem.' shouldn't "right" be "righted" to maintain the consistency of the verb tenses? xD
They are TOO unlucky for their own good! Or maybe... It's the OTHER way around... They're JUST TOO LUCKY! xD
Luck... is starting to act ike a p******... But that makes me love him even more! xD :D :)
When Luck apologized, which I NEVER thought that he would do by saying "...I had no right to mock you or what you're trying to do." , shouldn't "or" be "on" ? xD
I really wanted them to end up so badly in the anime! They're like, MEANT FOR EACH OTHER! I LOVE THEM!
PLEASE keep it up! And if this isn't a one - shot PLEASE update sooner! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! :D :)
| i'm not ulysses chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
O-omgosh. As child-like that expression may sound, it's the only expression I was able to utter after reading this... this gold. I loved every single bit of this! Your vocabulary and ability to ease it in and make it flow so nicely is amazing. It fits perfectly well into the presence of elegance that is Luck Gandor and Eve Genoard.
Of course, that elegance was sure to be broken by their little... mishaps. Perfect ice breaker if I say so myself! Pun intended! Haha
Ah, thank you so much for satisfying my Luck/Eve wants, this just hit the spot! And oh, one little thing I have to tell you, my favourite line in the entire story was when Luck told Eve being with her is such an adventure. I literally did flips after that!
I-I want to make this into a sequential art piece someday if you don't mind! If you do, that's fine too! Haha
Ah, anyway, thanks so much for writing! I love it! :)